THE HUNGRY ONE Episode 1
By
Frank Juchniewicz
2021 Frank Horror, LLCTHE HUNGRY ONE EPISODE 1
SCENE 1: NON-SEQUENTIAL COUNTING
INT. ABBOTT HOUSE, JUSTINE’S BEDROOM - NIGHT
NARRATOR
They tell you that monsters aren’t real. They tell you
this as a child, afraid of the dark, imploring the
adults for help. "But monsters aren’t real, honey. Go
back to bed. There’s nothing to be afraid of." They
tell you that, placating you with the best of
intentions. But they are wrong. Monsters are real and
you are right to be afraid.
(A LONG PAUSE)
JUSTINE
(WHISPERS)
Fourteen...seven...sixty-three...ten...one hundred and
twenty-two...eighty-nine...
NARRATOR
It’s that time of night when the television gets turned
off, when her mom goes to bed, that the house slumps
into a silence. That’s when her mind rushes to fill
that vast, empty quiet. Her thoughts reverberate like
echoes, repetitive and expansive... Scary thoughts that
she can’t turn off.
JUSTINE
(WHISPERS)
Eight...thirty...seventy-six...five...
NARRATOR
Justine Abbott knows from experience that simply trying
to ignore the thoughts is futile. Lying there in the
dark trying to sleep only makes it worse. She’s got to
get out of bed, distract herself until the scary
thoughts pass. In times like these, her mind is her
enemy; she is at war with herself, struggling to keep
her incessant ruminations from whipping her into a
panic.
JUSTINE
Fifty-eight...twenty-three...
NARRATOR
It’s been like this off and on since she was a kid. In
her late teens and early twenties these episodes abated
somewhat, probably crowded out by the everyday
distractions of trying to figure out how to fit in and
find her place in the world-- not to mention going off
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NARRATOR (cont’d)
to college, juggling new responsibilities and living on
her own. In fact, by the time she had adjusted to
on-campus life, she thought maybe she had finally
outgrown this childhood fear... Maybe this gave her a
false sense of security. Maybe she thought it was
finally safe to talk about it. So when she foolishly
told two of her dorm-mates about when she was eight
years old, about the incident in the woods... That’s
when things got bad again. And it’s been that way ever
since.
JUSTINE
(WHISPERS)
Eleven...seven hundred and ten...
NARRATOR
And here she is now, a college graduate, all these
years later in her twenties, STILL trying not to think
about the thing that terrifies her the most.
And therein lies the conundrum: in actively trying not
to recall what happened that day, in trying NOT to
think about it, she can’t help but think about it. It’s
impossible not to. Especially once the fear sets in.
JUSTINE
Seventy-nine...one...
NARRATOR
Justine had learned that ticking off a series of random
numbers - what’s known as non-sequential counting - can
occupy your mind enough to pull you out of a spiral of
obsessive thoughts.
The counting isn’t working. Sometimes it does, but not
tonight. Tonight the sickly sensation of fear crawls
through her, just beneath her skin, lifting the soft
hairs on her arms and the back of her neck on end.
(A BEAT)
NARRATOR
Her bedroom looks different in the dark. Larger,
somehow. More corners in which things can hide. Her
imagination transforms the stout silhouettes of her
bedroom furniture into something more ominous -
crouched figures pressed against the walls, looming.
SOUND: LAMP SWITCH CLICKING ON.
NARRATOR
One click of the table lamp next to the bed is enough
to dispel that illusion and provide her momentary
relief. As much as she hates to rely on it, as much as
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NARRATOR (cont’d)
she hates the groggy feeling in her head the next day,
she relents and pulls the sleeping pills out of her
nightstand.
SOUND: NIGHTSTAND DRAWER OPENING. RATTLE OF PILLS IN A PILL
BOTTLE. GULP OF WATER.
NARRATOR
It’ll take some time for the pill to kick in, and
laying here cowering won’t do her any good. Justine
gets out of bed, intending to find another way to
distract herself. Her mom’s room is right next to the
living room and, for some reason, her mom sleeps with
her bedroom door open - she always has. With this in
mind, careful not to turn on too many lights or clatter
around too much, Justine tiptoes through the hallway,
through the dining room, and into the living room.
SOUND: SHUFFLING FOOTSEPS ON CARPET.
NARRATOR
Here she sidles over towards one of the front windows
and leans in, parting the blinds with her fingers,
daring to peek through towards the murky yard beyond.
She sees nothing outside, of course. Was she really
expecting to see it prowling out there in the yard?
(A BEAT)
NARRATOR
She tries to force a laugh in spite of herself, but
it’s not funny. None of this is funny. So she indulges
her paranoia in one final gesture by testing the
window. Satisfied that it’s locked up tight, she now
needs to let this go and try and get some sleep.
Tomorrow is a work day and that alarm is going to hit
her like a jackhammer if she doesn’t get to bed soon.
Keeping the volume low, Justine settles into the living
room couch and turns on the TV. She zeroes in on “Real
Talk with Jacinta Woods” - Mom’s favorite daytime talk
show. There’s something about the presence of a live
studio audience paired with the upbeat banter between
host and guests that Justine finds comforting in
moments like these. She selects one of the streaming
episodes with Jacinta’s frequent guest, Dr. Gottschalk
(or Dr. G as they call him for short). Justine finds
his discussions about psychology and self-help to be
more substantive than celebrities plugging their latest
films or album releases. Dr. G’s topic in this
particular episode is Anxiety - how we all experience
anxiety as a part of our everyday life, but how it can
be more severe in some, crippling in some cases. Using
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NARRATOR (cont’d)
layman’s terms, Dr. G describes the interdependence of
thoughts, emotions and physical sensations - how
anxious thoughts can cause negative emotions, which can
drive the body into a heightened state, which in turn
add fuel to even more anxious thoughts. And so the
cycle continues to escalate. Jacinta cuts in to make a
joke, relating this to how she feels before hosting
holiday dinners with her in-laws. Laughter swells from
the audience. Justine laughs along, feeling some of the
tension easing from her chest. Eventually the talk show
prattle stretches into a thin, drone of sound and
Justine dozes off on the couch, a murky cloud of
medicating sleep holding at bay all of the scary
monsters, distant and forgotten... for now.
SCENE 2: ANIMAL NOISES
INT. ABBOTT HOUSE, KITCHEN - DAY
SOUND: JARRING ALARM SOUND.
JUSTINE
(GROANS)
SOUND: TAPPING THE ALARM AND IT SILENCES.
NARRATOR
The morning alarm finds Justine in her bedroom in a
series of alerts and snoozes - struggle the alarm
eventually wins. As sleep drains from her head, she’s
left with the vague memory of getting up from the couch
in the middle of the night, going to the bathroom and
climbing into her bed. She dreads the workday ahead,
but at least she goes into it armed with a few hours of
solid sleep. Drawn by the aroma of freshly-brewed
coffee, emerging from the dark cave of her bedroom, the
kitchen, by contrast, was awash in obnoxious sunlight
punching its way through the windows. Morning felt
impossibly loud, so she squinted in an attempt to limit
how much of it she allowed in at one time.
SHERRI
Oh look, it emerges! Good morning, remember we’ve got
bagels from Finkel’s. I know you like the poppyseed...
Shhh, I forgot! Don’t talk to you until you have your
coffee.
JUSTINE
Mmm-hmm.
SOUND: CLATTER OF THE COFFEE POT, POURING OUT A CUP AND
TAKING A SIP.
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 5.
SHERRI
Is it safe now?
JUSTINE
Mom--
SHERRI
They had the veggie spread you like.
JUSTINE
I kept hitting snooze, so I don’t think I’ll have time
before work.
SHERRI
Well take one with you. I’ll toast it while you get
ready.
(A BEAT)
SHERRI
Did you hear that animal last night?
JUSTINE
What? What animal?
SHERRI
I don’t know how that didn’t wake you.
JUSTINE
I took an Ambien. Couldn’t sleep, so... I took that
around two o’clock. They always knock me out.
SHERRI
Yeah, this was probably a little after three.
JUSTINE
What animal, Mom? What was it?
SHERRI
Hell if I know. Woke me up from a deep sleep. Scared
the hell out of me. It sounded like something getting
murdered. Or maybe it was in heat, who knows.
JUSTINE
Could be a fox. They can make a sound kind of like a
scream.
SHERRI
Well, whatever it was it must have been right here in
the yard because it was loud. If I hear it again I’m
calling Animal Control. What if it has rabies or
something?
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NARRATOR
That’s another drawback of taking a sleeping aid -
anything could happen in the night and Justine may not
hear it. She could end up sleeping helplessly through
potential danger...A worrisome thought, considering
what she thinks may be out there stalking her. Before
she has a chance to go too far down that rabbit hole,
though, a glance at the advancing clock brings a spike
of anxiety and a realization...
JUSTINE
Shit! I’m going to be late.
NARRATION
Hustling to get ready, Justine makes some mental
calculations about which steps of her routine can be
skipped this morning and what she can accomplish on her
car ride to the university.
SCENE 3: OBJECTS ON THE LAWN
EXT. ABBOTT HOUSE, FRONT WALK - DAY
NARRATOR
Fighting through the residual muck left behind by last
night’s sleeping pill, Justine manages a quick prep for
work.
SOUND: FRONT DOOR OPENING AND BIRDS CHIRPING OUTSIDE. A
FLURRY OF FOOTSTEPS ON THE WALK AS JUSTINE RACES TO THE CAR.
NARRATOR
Armed with her travel mug of coffee, Justine rushes out
the front door. Sherri follows, calling out before
Justine reaches her car.
SHERRI
(IN THE DISTANCE)
Justine!
NARRATION
She holds up the toasted bagel and Justine circles back
for it.
JUSTINE
Thanks!
SHERRI
Is that what you’re wearing? It’s supposed to be a hot
one today.
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JUSTINE
Mom, they crank the AC at the university.
SHERRI
Okay, okay. Have a good day.
SOUND: CAR DOOR OPENING AND CLOSING QUICKLY. CAR ENGINE
COMING TO LIFE, THEN THE CAR CAREFULLY BACKING UP INTO THE
STREET. THEN ACCELERATING OFF.
NARRATION
Sherri lingers in the walkway near the house, watching
her daughter hop into the car and back out of the
driveway in a hurry. It’s not lost on her how the years
rush by, how her apple-cheeked little girl has matured
into a young woman. And yet, here Sherri still does
mom-things like standing here worrying over her until
her car is down the road and out of sight, wondering if
she could have done more to help propel her daughter
into the day ahead. Even when they’re grown and don’t
need you anymore, that maternal instinct is hard to
shake. And that’s the part that troubles Sherri the
most-- the not being needed, at least not in the way
she used to be. Still, she can congratulate herself
that, despite the challenge of raising a daughter as a
single mom, she must have done some things right. The
grounded, competent, intelligent woman that Justine
became is evidence of that.
SHERRI
(SIGHS)
NARRATOR
With a sigh she pivots back towards the house, her
thoughts turning towards which projects to tackle
today. It would be easy to lapse into relaxation mode
and squander her time off - time that she had
specifically earmarked for organizing her things. She
squints as the morning sun fans her face and something
else catches her attention. There in the grass near the
edge of the house she spies something obnoxiously
orange. She trudges over to the object to find a Nerf
football laying abandoned and forgotten. The next door
neighbors have two young boys and inevitably balls,
badmitten shuttles, toys, all find their way over the
fence and onto her lawn. As she always does in this
case, Sherri retrieves the football and tosses is back
over the fence to its rightful owners. But this little
errand over to the fence opens up a vantage point to
the side yard, and in that narrow strip of grass she
spies yet another object. This one, however, is
different. Darker. Closer to the house. Slightly
larger. This one has fur.
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 8.
NARRATOR
The way it’s laying, immobile, suggests it is either
sleeping or dead. Sherri approaches with caution,
figuring that if the animal is still alive but severely
wounded (and judging by the deep red gashes in its
flank, it would have to be), then it could be
dangerous. A wounded and frightened animal unable to
flee is likely to lash out. She prods it gently with
the tip of her slipper, ready to jump back if it
flinches or reacts in any way; it does neither.
Relieved, she uses her foot to push it over a little
and get a better look.
SOUND: A SMALL BODY FLOPPING OVER IN THE GRASS.
SHERRI
Oh my god!
NARRATOR
It’s a possum, or rather what’s left of one. The gashes
in its sides were just a hint of the carnage
underneath. Bloody ribbons of furred flesh splay from a
deep wound on its underside. It looks as if it were
gnawed through, straight into its belly. This possum
wasn’t just killed, it was predated. Something much
larger ate a whole right through its midsection,
leaving the carcass like a deflated sack of bones and
skin and fur. Could a dog have been responsible for
this? Or something more wild, like a fox? She recounted
the horrible screeching that awoke her in the middle of
the night.
SHERRI
Ugh, what a mess!
NARRATION
What does one do in this situation? She considers
calling animal control, but there’s nothing to control,
really. It’s already dead. She decides to dispose of it
herself. But the prospect of handling the carcass, even
with gloves, is repulsive given its bloody state. The
shovel in the shed should do the trick. Sherri scoops
it up, the poor thing, and drops it into the trash can.
SOUND: THE BODY OF THE DEAD POSSUM BEING DUMPED IN THE
TRASHCAN AND THE LID BEING PLACED BACK ON TOP.
NARRATOR
Trash collection is tomorrow and, even though it’s been
unseasonably warm, it is still October. It probably
won’t start to reek too badly in the next 24 hours.
SOUND: GARDEN HOSE STREAMING AT FULL FORCE HITTING THE
SHOVEL BLADE.
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NARRATOR
Once this is done, Sherri hoses the blood and grue off
the shovel blade and second-guesses herself as to
whether or not burying the possum would have been the
right thing to do. Then again, it’s not like it was
anyone’s pet; it was just a wild animal. She gazes at
the trash can from afar and wonders if the possum had
babies to care for, responsibilities left unfulfilled.
SHERRI
(IN RESIGNATION)
Well... I hope you weren’t someone’s mama.
(SIGHS)
SCENE 4: DOLLHOUSE
EXT. UNIVERSITY LAWN, OUTDOOR BENCH - DAY
SOUND: DISTANT BACKGROUND CHATTER EVERY NOW AND THEN OF
STUDENTS MOVING ABOUT ON CAMPUS. BIRDS CHIRPING IN THE
TREETOPS.
NARRATOR
Combine lack of sleep and an Ambien hangover with a job
in IT where you sit at a desk and state at computer
code all day; the result is a hellish case of eye
strain. And coffee only gets you so far before the
wheels come off that train. So meeting Allie for lunch
at one of the picnic tables on the campus lawn,
breathing in a jolt of fresh air, that seemed like a
stellar idea to propel Justine through the latter half
of the workday. Unfortunately, a number of factors
conspired against that plan: the mild temperature and
soft, whispering breeze; the sun splashing her face and
hands with its warmth; the steady drone of distant
student’s voices loitering around campus. While she
waits for Allie to show, Justine’s gaze rests upon the
tips of the trees, their foliage thinning and drying
like sheets of paper, the colors of sunset and rust.
Her pulse thrums in her head, lulling her into a daze
and when she blinks her eyelids nearly stick together.
SOUND: A SINGLE PAIR OF FOOTSTEPS APPROACHING THROUGH THE
GRASS.
ALLIE
Hey! Sorry, I got stuck on an issue with that
registration software. Again. That’s a mess and
Khatri’s still pushing it. She’s determined to go down
with that ship and in the meantime that means we’re all
bailing water... What happened to you?
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JUSTINE
What?
ALLIE
You look like shit. No offense.
JUSTINE
I’ve had a headache all day. I’m not sleeping again.
ALLIE
(HESITANT)
Is it...? You know? I’m kind of afraid to even ask.
JUSTINE
Yeah. That’s it. I feel like it’s going to happen
again.
ALLIE
Shit. Has it?
JUSTINE
No. Not yet. It’s not to that point yet. But it will be
if I don’t stop thinking about it. I just... My mind is
racing and I tell myself, ‘Don’t think about it,
Justine. Think about something else. Think about my
neighbor’s dog, or the plot to the last Hemmingway
novel I just read, or the trip I took to Ireland last
spring. Just think about something... ELSE.’
ALLIE
Okay, that’s good. Does that work?
JUSTINE
Not really. Allie, there’s nothing that seems to really
work. I try to distract myself. I try not to think
about it, but the more I tell myself not to think about
it... the more my mind goes right back to it. I can’t
help it. And then I’m terrified. And that fear makes it
all seem... dangerous. My thoughts aren’t in my control
anymore.
(A PAUSE)
JUSTINE
(DROPPING HER VOICE TO A WHISPER)
It’s going to find me again, Allie. I’m scared to death
that it’s going to happen again.
ALLIE
It doesn’t have to. You went years since the last...
incident. Right? You went this long without seeing her.
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JUSTINE
I know, I’m only making things worse. That’s the point.
Even just talking about it like this is probably enough
to make it happen.
ALLIE
All right, slow down. Relax. It’s not going to help to
work yourself up over it. The best thing you can do is
to keep from panicking. It’s like a panic attack,
right? My sister used to get those in high school and
she said a panic attack is like those old Chinese
finger traps; the more you panic and try to pull away,
the worse it’s going to get. So you just have to relax,
just breathe.
JUSTINE
Yeah, easier said than done. It’s like obsessive
thoughts that I can’t turn off, and I need to learn how
to do that. I’m going to a counselor tomorrow night.
Janie on Tom’s team had some issues with anxiety after
her second child and she told me about her counselor.
She recommended him.
ALLIE
Okay. I think that’s good. This is a lot like anxiety,
so... yeah. When’s your first session?
JUSTINE
After work.
ALLIE
Today? Good! That’s really good.
JUSTINE
You think I’m crazy. I know how it sounds.
ALLIE
You’re not crazy.
JUSTINE
You’re like the only person I’ve told about this.
You’re the only person I trust.
ALLIE
Like you said, it’s been years since the last time it
happened. What do you think is triggering it this time?
(A BEAT)
JUSTINE
Mikey. My cousin. I haven’t talked to him in years. He
and his wife just moved to town. He got some kind of a
corporate job downtown.
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ALLIE
He was there. The first time. In the woods?
JUSTINE
He knew the story. He’s the one that told us. And then
we all saw it.
(SHUDDERS)
I can’t! I have to change the subject, Allie. I can’t.
I’m starting to feel the panic--
ALLIE
Okay. Okay, yeah. Let’s change the subject. Ummmm, how
about Aaron?
JUSTINE
Aaron. Okay, let’s talk about Aaron.
ALLIE
Did you mention me yet?
JUSTINE
No, I didn’t climb Monday night. The other two couldn’t
make it so it would have just been Aaron and I. And I’m
not comfortable with that.
ALLIE
Well, what is he? Some kind of creep?
JUSTINE
No, he’s nice. He’s perfectly nice, he’s just not my
type. I just didn’t want to deal with the awkwardness.
But I’m heading to the rock gym tomorrow night, so I’ll
talk to him then. I’ll mention my single friend.
ALLIE
The old bait and switch. Hey, beggars can’t be
choosers.
JUSTINE
I never baited him, Allie. He did that all on his own.
(A BEAT)
JUSTINE
So, I don’t really want to go back into it, but... you
don’t believe me? About...?
ALLIE
Oh no, I believe you. I believe you saw what you saw. I
just don’t know what to make of it. I’m not so
convinced that it’s real.
(A PAUSE)
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ALLIE
When I was six years old... I’ll never forget. It was
Christmas Eve and I had been so good all year. I tried
extra hard that year because there was this dollhouse I
wanted. It was so big and amazing that it came in like
three different sections and you had to put it
together. I mean, this thing would take up a third of
your bedroom, that’s how awesome it was. And so I knew
that Santa was watching, because that’s what he does,
right? He’s always watching to see if you’re good, and
if you’re not then your parents lord that over you to
get you to behave. But I was good that year because I
wanted that dollhouse so badly. I mean, we were six
days out from Christmas (I remember because we had one
of those Advent calendars and I was excited about the
partridge on the day six marker). Anyway, this is
besides the point. When you get kids all worked up
about the approach of Christmas and Santa and presents,
and then you expect them to behave... Yeah, that’s not
happening. So I had made it this far: six days from
Christmas. All I had to do was be good and that
dollhouse was mine, I was sure of it. Well, my brother
Robbie rips my stuffed dog out of my hands for some
stupid reason and I went ape-shit. I started screaming
at him, so he goes off running. And I chase him through
the house and we end up knocking a vase off the living
room table. CRASH! This thing shatters into a million
shards and Mom comes running, mad as hell because that
vase was a gift. It was quite a scene: She’s yelling at
us, scooping up the pieces from the floor. Robbie and I
are crying, and just then... I glance over there he
was. Peering in the window with his white gloves
pressed against the glass and his old white beard
clinging to his wide, red face. It was Santa, and I saw
him clear as day watching us. Just as clearly as I see
you right now.
(A BEAT)
ALLIE
Now, you and I know that’s not what really happened. We
know that my imagination conjured that in the moment.
Emotions were running high, my expectations were set.
Now I know Santa doesn’t really exist, and I’m not
crazy, but in that moment what I saw was real to me.
JUSTINE
So what happened?
ALLIE
You want to know what happened? I’ll tell you what
happened: That Christmas... I got my dollhouse.
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JUSTINE
That’s the moral of the story?
ALLIE
I don’t know. What do you want from me? I think it’s a
good story and I stand by it... The point is, I think
that what you saw in the woods when you were little is
kind of like when I saw Santa in the window.
(A BEAT)
ALLIE
The mind plays tricks.
JUSTINE
...I wish that were so.
SCENE 5: A THERAPEUTIC APPROACH
INT. DR. OSBOURNE’S HOUSE, THERAPY OFFICE - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Walking into therapy for the first time is a daunting
process. She’s not entirely sure what to expect, how
she will be judged. And the thought of talking about
that thing she encountered in the woods as a child --
well, that frightens her more than anything because she
knows from past encounters that talking about it, even
thinking about it, seems to draw its attention to her.
Like a mosquito bite: the more you scratch it, the
angrier it gets. But Justine is desperate for whatever
tools therapy can give her, to help shut down those
thoughts before that thing senses them and hones in on
her again. Provided it’s not already too late, that
it’s not already stalking her.
NARRATOR
Dr. James Osbourne’s office is a separate little
section built onto the side of his house, which feels
warmer and more welcoming to Justine than going to some
cookie-cutter corporate office suite. While his dark
hair and a full beard with a dusting of white hides
most of his face, his eyes twinkle with kindness.
There’s a paternal benevolence about him that feels
safe, that makes it easier to open up about what
happened in the woods that day. Mindful to probe the
incident enough to get a grasp on what happened, Dr.
Osbourne was careful not to dwell on it before setting
expectations and laying out possible solutions. All of
this gave Justine cause for a small glimmer of hope.
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 15.
DR. OSBOURNE
I can see you become... physically uncomfortable when
you talk about what happened.
JUSTINE
I don’t like talking about it.
DR. OSBOURNE
Because you’re afraid it will happen again.
JUSTINE
Because I KNOW it will. It seems to know when I talk
about it, when I think about it. And that’s when it
comes.
DR. OSBOURNE
...Are you aware of the term self-fulfilling prophecy?
It’s when you believe something very deeply. You
believe something is going to happen, and so you act
accordingly. You anticipate that event and you behave
in a way that you think will best prepare you for it.
But in doing so you, yourself, are creating the very
event that you feared.
JUSTINE
That’s exactly what’s happening. But I don’t know how
to stop it. The more afraid I get, the more I think
about it, the more afraid I get. And I’ve tried the
things I learned from reading books or watching pop
psychologists like Dr. G... little tricks like
non-sequential counting... Those work a little, but
it’s not enough.
(A PAUSE)
DR. OSBOURNE
I don’t suspect this, but I would like to do some
evaluations just to rule out other mental illness.
Psychosis, schizophrenia. I’m not seeing that, but just
to be safe...
JUSTINE
Dr. Osbourne, you asked me about my goal for treatment.
My goal is: help me stop that self-fulfilling prophecy.
I don’t want to see that thing again. I don’t EVER want
to see it again.
DR. OSBOURNE
There are some cognitive behavioral techniques we can
use that can be pretty effective. Thought stopping to
break to chain of obsessive thoughts, some relaxation
techniques to bring down your baseline anxiety. And
EMDR is an approach that works really well with trauma.
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JUSTINE
(TAKEN OFF-GUARD)
Trauma?
DR. OSBOURNE
Sure. Not in the sense of, say a veteran with PTSD who
lived through his humvee being blown up - that’s an
example on the extreme end. But trauma is relative,
it’s subjective. What happened to you when you were
eight years old impacted you... in a traumatic way.
JUSTINE
I never thought of it like that.
(A BEAT)
JUSTINE
So what is this E...D...?
DR. OSBOURNE
EMDR- Eye Movement Desensiti--
(A BEAT)
DR. OSBOURNE
I always stumble on this. Eye Movement Desensitization
and Reprocessing.
(CHUCKLES)
That’s a mouthful. You can see why it’s abbreviated...
It’s a method where we can use some physiological
stimulation while reconnecting you to the traumatic
event in a way that can break those negative
associations with the event. And I mean, that’s putting
it simply, but...
JUSTINE
You’re saying it can make me less afraid? So I wouldn’t
obsess about it? So I wouldn’t constantly struggle with
trying not to think about it? EMDR can do that?
DR. OSBOURNE
It is an evidence-based therapy. I’ve used it with many
clients. It can be very effective.
JUSTINE
(EAGERLY)
I want that. EMDR. I want to do that... I want to be
free of this.
DR. OSBOURNE
All right. Well, Tuesdays at this same time are open. I
can set you up with a weekly standing appointment--
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 17.
JUSTINE
Can you do sooner? Do you have anything before next
Tuesday?
DR. OSBOURNE
I don’t, actually. This is a pretty packed week. Ummm,
but I can call you if someone cancels, if I get an
opening before Tuesday. Would that be okay?
JUSTINE
Yes. Yes, let’s do that.
SCENE 6: THAT FEELING OF BEING
WATCHED
EXT. DR. OSBOURNE’S DRIVEWAY - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Despite the island of hope that her therapy session
provided, there was still the prospect of leaving
afterwards, turning back out into the world where the
days grew shorter and night held sway.
SOUND: CLOSING THE DOOR TO THE THERAPY OFFICE FOLLOWED BY
HURRIED FOOTSTEPS ON THE DRIVE.
NARRATOR
Stepping outside, greeted now by the gloom, Justine
hurries to her car. Fearful, her eyes tack to the dark
shadows around the hedges, under the porch, to the
treeline on the far side of the drive. Justine had
managed for so long not to openly talk about what
happened in the woods all those years ago, to
effectively repress the memory of it. But then recently
she opened up to her work friend, Allie, and now Dr.
Osbourne. After those years of silence it felt so
gratifyingly freeing to do so, but terrifying at the
same time. Has she opened the floodgates? Has she
caused that horrible monstrosity to find her again, to
hunt her down? She’s gripped by the eerie sensation
that she’s being watched from somewhere in the dark
behind the house.
SOUND: THE CAR DOOR OPENS AND CLOSES AGAIN QUICKLY. KEYS IN
THE IGNITION, CAR ENGINE COMING TO LIFE AND BEING THROWN IN
REVERSE.
NARRATOR
Dr. Osbourne seems confident in his ability to help
her; she just has to hold out until the next session.
And, like he said, hopefully he can even squeeze her in
sooner if he gets a cancellation. The promise of help
is finally coming, but this last stretch while she’s
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 18.
NARRATOR (cont’d)
waiting to be rescued is by far the most frightening
and seems to be the most fraught with peril. Until
Justine sees Dr. Osbourne again she’s going to need to
be very careful.
SCENE 7: INDIAN SUMMER
EXT. ABBOTT HOUSEHOLD DRIVEWAY - NIGHT
SOUND: FRANTIC JINGLE OF KEYS.
NARRATOR
Once home, Justine fumbles with the keys in the door,
nervous to get inside quickly, afraid to look around
over her shoulder. She closes the door behind her and,
only after locking it does she issue a small sigh of
relief.
SOUND: LOCKS AND CHAIN ON THE DOOR.
JUTINE
(SIGHS)
SHERRI (FROM THE OTHER ROOM)
Justine?
JUSTINE
Oh, hey Mom!
SOUND: JUSTINE TOSSING HER KEYS IN A BASKET BY THE DOOR AND
DRIFTS INTO THE KITCHEN.
SHERRI
I just assumed you were coming right home after work.
JUSTINE
I had some errands to run. Things to take care of.
SHERRI
Ooh, I like that shirt. That color looks good on you.
JUSTINE
Thanks, Mom.
SHERRI
I cooked dinner for you. I was waiting for you to get
home, but then I just went ahead and ate.
JUSTINE
You don’t have to wait for me, Mom. That’s fine.
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 19.
SHERRI
Are you hungry? It’s still out on the stove.
JUSTINE
A little bit, I guess. I can pick at some of this.
SHERRI
Go ahead and eat.
SOUND: UTENSILS AGAINST THE SIDE OF A POT AND CLINKING ON
THE DISH.
SHERRI
What about the chicken? Do you want any of that?
JUSTINE
Nah.
SHERRI
Well take it for your lunch tomorrow.
JUSTINE
I gave up eating animals, Mom. Remember?
SHERRI
Like for real? Like for good?... Ohh, I thought that
was just like a temporary diet thing. Like a cleanse?
Is that what they call it now?
JUSTINE
No, I’m vegetarian now.
SHERRI
Oh. Whatever.
SOUND: KITCHEN CHAIR SLIDING BACK AS JUSTINE SITS. CLINKING
OF SILVERWARE ON THE PLATE.
(A BEAT)
SHERRI
Well, I’m going to go watch my shows. Is it just me, or
is it hot in here?
JUSTINE
I mean, it is warm.
SHERRI
Right? It’s unseasonably warm. They talked about it on
the news tonight...
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 20.
JUSTINE
(HER MOUTH FULL OF FOOD)
Global warming. It is a thing, Mom.
SHERRI
Well, whatever it is, it almost hit eighty degrees
today. That’s ridiculous. It’s just stuffy in here. So
I think I’m going to leave some of these windows open
tonight.
JUSTINE
(SUDDENLY NERVOUS)
Oh... I don’t think that’s a good idea.
SHERRI
Why? Don’t you think we might sleep a little better if
the house cools off a bit?
JUSTINE
Let’s leave them closed.
SHERRI
Why? What’s the matter?
JUSTINE
(FUMBLING TO COME UP WITH A REASON)
M-my allergies... You know how my allergies get.
SHERRI
It’s a little late in the season. Are you sure?
JUSTINE
They were acting up today. I think maybe with it
getting warm like it did, maybe it stirred something
up.
SHERRI
Okay. Whatever you say, hun. We can leave them closed.
NARRATOR
Justine manages to bury the greater part of her unease,
at least until her mother leaves the kitchen. The
thought of that monster skulking around the house in
the middle of the night, looking for a way in with the
only barricade the flimsy, mesh window screen... that
was too much for her anxiety to bear. She will sweat
herself to sleep if she has to.21.
SCENE 8: STRIPPED DOWN
INT. ABBOTT HOUSEHOLD, BATHROOM - NIGHT
SOUND: SINK TAP RUNNING, VIGOROUS TOOTHBRUSH STROKES
NARRATOR
Sweating herself to sleep would have been preferable,
because that at least implies she would get sleep. Much
needed sleep. It isn’t until she takes in her
reflection in the bathroom mirror that she registers
the toll these sleepless nights are taking on her. The
dark pools beneath her eyes can be concealed with
makeup, but stripped down like this in the stark
bathroom lighting, she looks like a mental patient. And
again her thoughts return to the memories and fears
that torment her.
JUSTINE
Not now, not now. Stop... You don’t have to think about
that, you can think about anything you want.
(A BEAT)
JUSTINE
(FRUSTRATED SIGH, WHISPERING)
Fifteen... Thirty-seven.... Eighty-nine...
Three...Twenty--two...Seventy-six...
(FADE OUT ON HER COUNTING)
SCENE 9: WHAT ABOUT THE WINDOWS?
INT. ABBOTT HOUSEHOLD, JUSTINE’S ROOM - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Is it a trick of perception? Is it her imagination
taking liberties with her escalating fear? Is she
really catching some kind of subtle movement within the
murky shadows in the corners of the room? They shudder
in time to the beat of her pulse around her drooping
eyes. Justine surrenders to exhaustion, closing them
momentarily, but that leaves her blind to what could be
happening around her. A spike of fear shoots beneath
her breastbone and her pop open to scan the darkened
room and her surroundings for any signs of danger. Once
again, being trapped inside her head feels like being
locked inside a runaway train of thoughts careening out
of control. Her racing mind is only making matters
worse and Justine recognizes she needs to break this
chain of obsession, but no matter how hard she tries
she can’t shake the spooky feeling that she’s not alone
here, that she’s being watched. And this gives rise to
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 22.
NARRATOR (cont’d)
the dreadful anticipation that something terrible is
about to happen.
She sits up to reach for her phone and airpods, but
thinks better of it - the notion of listening to music,
of willfully surrendering her sense of hearing, of not
being able to hear the sounds of danger approaching,
causes a fist of anxiety in her gut. So she sets those
items back on the nightstand from where they came.
After the grogginess she swam through today, the
thought of piling on another Ambien doesn’t seem
tenable. What if she were to read? That could work;
that could quiet her thoughts and lull her into sleep.
SOUND: CLICKS ON THE LIGHT, SITS UP IN BED, FLIPS THROUGH A
PAPERBACK.
NARRATOR
With the small of her back to the pillows propped
against the headboard, Justine reads a few chapters of
a paperback that she’s been laboring to get through.
That helps distract her at first, but as the printed
words turn soft and begin to lose meaning, her mind
drifts and finds herself thinking about the windows of
the house. Her mother agreed to leave them shut
tonight, but Sherri Abbott was notorious for placating
you verbally and then doing exactly what she intended
anyway. A clear line from Justine’s own inherited
stubbornness could be drawn back to her mother.
NARRATOR
The notion that the windows may be wide open, that
Justine had failed to check them, ushers in a fresh
wave of panic. Tossing the book aside, Justine gets up
to roam the house, clicking on a few lights as she goes
- enough to stave off the dark. Starting with the
kitchen, Justine moves window to window throughout the
house, checking them each in turn, ensuring that her
mother - true to her word - did, in fact keep them
closed (and latched) as agreed. Roaming the house, in
the midst of her inspection, with her back to her
mother’s room, Justine fails to sense the stir of air
as the bedroom door creeps open behind her. She fails
to spot the movement of a shape emerging from the
darkness within, ambling up behind her. Justine turns
to click off the hallway light, turns just enough to
catch a glimpse out of the corner of her eye. But it’s
too late - before she can react, an extended limb
reaches her, grasps her by the shoulder....
(CONTINUED)CONTINUED: 23.
JUSTINE
(SCREAMS)
TO BE CONTINUED