The Book Deal

The Publishing Deal: Publisher, Tom Langshaw, on the strongest elements in a fiction manuscript, what to include in your submission pitch, and industry trends

The Book Deal Season 1 Episode 61

In this episode of The Book Deal podcast, host Natasha Rai interviews Tom Langshaw, publisher at Pantera Press. Tom discusses his journey from working at Penguin Random House to his current role, explaining the intricacies of the publishing process from manuscript acquisition to promotion. He shares insights on what makes a manuscript stand out, the importance of voice and character in fiction, and the significance of timing and market trends in publishing decisions. Tom also emphasizes the value of respectful and collaborative relationships with authors and offers advice for emerging writers on perfecting their pitches. Additionally, Tom highlights concerns about the consolidation in the publishing industry and the importance of supporting independent publishers.

00:00 Welcome to The Book Deal Podcast
00:56 Meet Tom Langshaw: Publisher at Pantera Press
01:57 A Day in the Life of a Publisher
04:45 The Art of Manuscript Selection
08:31 From Editorial Assistant to Publisher
12:17 Navigating the Publishing Industry
16:06 The Role of Sales and Trends in Publishing
21:19 Transitioning to Pantera Press
32:16 Building Relationships in Publishing
33:21 Connecting with Booksellers
34:34 Reading for Work vs. Pleasure
36:03 Editing Tips for Writers
38:48 Common Mistakes in Pitching
45:43 Trends in the Publishing Industry
48:32 Advice for Emerging Writers
56:39 Exciting Upcoming Books
01:00:13 Final Thoughts and Reflections

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This is The Book Deal podcast where you will discover the inspiring stories behind your favorite books. We interview seasoned and debut authors, as well as publishing industry professionals to bring you the best tips and advice on how to get that elusive book deal. So no matter what stage of writing your at. We've got you covered. I'm Tina Strachan. I'm Madeleine Cleary. And I'm Natasha Rai. And join us as we pull back the curtain of published authors one deal at a time. The Book Deal podcast acknowledges the traditional owners, of the land and waters, which it's recorded on and pays respect to their elders past, present, and emerging.

Natasha Rai:

Tom Langshaw is a publisher at Pantera Press, an imprint of Hardie Grant Publishing. Before his time at Pantera, he worked in various editorial roles at Penguin Random House. Tom publishes a wide range of nonfiction titles, including memoir, narrative nonfiction and personal development, and selected fiction titles. Authors he has worked with include Nadine J Cohen, Holden Sheppard, and Joseph Earp, performers, Em Rusciano, Courtney Act, and Natalie Bassingthwaighte and writers, Paul Callaghan, Elfy Scott, and James Colley. Tom Langshaw, welcome to The Book Deal podcast.

Tom Langshaw:

Hi Tash. Thanks for having me.

Natasha Rai:

My pleasure. Um, I think this is going to be quite a popular episode. Um, it's very lovely of you to agree to be, um, to talk to me today about publishing and publishing related advice, hopefully. Um, so let's start with what you do. So you are the publisher at Pantera Press? Yes. Can you tell me a little bit about like what your day-to-day work looks like?

Tom Langshaw:

So I'm involved with a book for its entire lifecycle, basically. So I seek out new submissions, whether that's a complete manuscript, uh, more for fiction or for nonfiction. Sometimes it's the germ of an idea that I'm developing with an author to flesh out a proposal, and then I will take that manuscript or proposal to an acquisitions meeting. If my colleagues are excited about it, as excited as I am, then I will hope to make an offer with the author. I will then, if that offer is accepted, negotiate a contract, um, with the author direct or with their agent, and then the process begins from there. We work on the editorial development of that manuscript, and we see it through the various stages of editorial. We see it through the structural, the copy, edit, the proofread, and then once the book is printed, I turn my attention fully to the promotional side of things. So the marketing and publicity campaigns. Liaising with the sales team to make sure the book is in as many retail channels as possible. And then beyond that initial promotional window, there's a whole longer term relationship with that author over multiple books, hopefully. Um, but even in terms of submitting to prizes or prize, submitting the book to overseas publishers and agents with the hope of a rights deal. So basically I'm a central point of contact for between the author and all different parts of the business. So a lot of my job is liaising between different people. Um, and really once I heard one of my colleagues at Penguin refer to the job of a publisher as being roughly equivalent to a producer of a film. So your job is to produce the work and be in the background, but you are furiously paddling away to make sure that everything is running smoothly.

Natasha Rai:

Wow. Any given week, you are working on several projects, several books at different stages, right?

Tom Langshaw:

Yes, definitely. And I think that's the challenging thing, but also the exciting part of the job is that you can be in the early formative stages of one project, and then you can also be working with an author who you've been working on multiple books with over many years. Um, and so yes, very much at different stages of development at any given time. And that, um, that constant balancing act is a big part of the job. But I think it does keep things interesting and it, it also just the, the diversity of subject matter and that the different people you're working with at any given moment keeps things interesting.

Natasha Rai:

So when you read something new, what is it that you find exciting about it? Like, what is it that you go, Ooh, I, I think I wanna know more about this, or I wanna take a chance on this?

Tom Langshaw:

I think the proposition is really different depending on what type of. Book it might be. So for a work of fiction, if I have a complete manuscript in front of me, that is very much a judgment of my taste and whether the manuscript is to my taste. It's a question of a subjective question, I should say, of my feeling about the manuscript's quality and um, really connecting. First and foremost, and this is almost a cliche at this point, every publisher and agent says this, but it is about voice for fiction. I really need to connect with the voice of a character or the narrator, and it needs to really leap out to me as fully formed. And that's quite often what I'm looking for is voice-driven, character-driven, works of fiction. Um, and I think a lot of people would agree with this. I probably read about 50 pages and that's my standard. Cutoff. Uh, if I'm engaged by this point and really feel compelled to keep reading, then I will continue. But if not, the sad reality is that there's a, there are only so many hours in the day that I can devote to a manuscript, and I feel like that's a fair enough chance that I've given a manuscript of 50 pages in. Uh, but if it hasn't grabbed me, then I'm just not the right reader for it. And I'm always at pains to tell writers and agents if it's not for me, it just means I'm not the right advocate and champion for your work. It doesn't mean any definitive value judgment on the work itself.

Natasha Rai:

How many manuscripts do you read in like a week typically?

Tom Langshaw:

Oh, that definitely differs week to week. I can tell you on my current manuscript reading list, I have, I think I counted 13, um, that I have to get through at some point soon. And. That's a constant balancing act as well, is working on the projects that I have under contract. And, uh, those that are more of a speculative venture at this point because I haven't yet read them and haven't yet been able to make that judgment. Um, so yes, the speed with which I read them maybe differs from week to week, and that number differs from week to week as well. Um, but yes, certainly there's a bit of a heaving pile at the moment. But the, the other thing I should say is that that's all, that's more so for fiction. So on the nonfiction side, I would say that the process is often quite different in terms of what is leading me towards a book idea. Um, quite often it is just an idea to start with, or it's, I've read an article by an, uh, by a writer and I, and I've thought that's particularly interesting. Or even just, I think this. Idea hasn't yet been covered at book length and there's potential there. And then I seek out a writer who I think would be the best fit for that project. So I would say it's quite a different proposition from the early stages, um, for, for fiction versus nonfiction.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah, it does sound like that because, you know, I have non-writer friends who ask me things like, oh, so are you gonna submit something to the publisher? Like, is it finished? I'm like, well, I only write fiction. So it, it has to be, it's quite rare, isn't it, to get picked, get picked up on an idea for fiction. Yeah. Quite rare. Yeah. Unless you're, I dunno, a Jane Harper or a Trent Dalton, they, they certainly set their own rules more so. Okay. So Tom, you are also an editor? Yes. Um, and recently a literary agent told me that you are at the moment, right now in our industry, one of the best editors.

Tom Langshaw:

Oh, that's very nice of them to say.

Natasha Rai:

And I believe that so. In your experience, like a lot of publish publishers, editors too, or is that something that you know, is, I don't know. Not as usual.

Tom Langshaw:

Publishers do have different backgrounds in terms of their skillset. I would say that the traditional pipeline always has been that publishers come from editorial. Um, there are some who have a marketing publicity background, some that have a sales background, and they obviously bring different attributes to the role as a result. But, um, I mean, I can only speak to my own experience here, but having that editorial background I think has been a huge, um, help to me as a publisher because you really do, um, having worked up through the editorial ladder, um, and I was at Penguin for many years and, and seeing. The great publishers there do their bigger picture structural edits and seeing how they briefed in copy edits. For example, you do really learn on the job, it's an apprenticeship. Mm-hmm. You learn on the job.

Natasha Rai:

Mm-hmm.

Tom Langshaw:

Um, so that was hugely valuable to me, and I think also cemented my desire to be a hands-on editorial focused publisher. That's what I enjoy about the job. It's, it's what keeps me going. And I think that is a, an important part of, um, the job as well is, is focusing on what brings you mind. Yeah.

Natasha Rai:

So, if it's okay with you, let's go back. Um, when did you first realized or discovered your passion or interest for, you know, not just editing, but reading in that very particular way that editors do? I think, well, going way back.

Tom Langshaw:

Depends how far you want to go back, Tash. Should we go to the beginning? Let's, let's

Natasha Rai:

go all the way back. Yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

So I grew up as the son of a librarian, so books were always a really. Important part of the household I grew up in. And my mom was always very encouraging of reading. And I think also there's a, a part of me that was a queer kid who found refuge in the school library as well, in primary school and then in high school. So books were always a safe space for me. Mm-hmm. And that's where my love for reading itself came from in terms of when I decided I wanted to, wanted to pursue that professionally. Yeah. But just before

Natasha Rai:

you tell me, yeah. When you were reading, were you just reading widely or were there particular types of stories that you were really drawn to as you know?

Tom Langshaw:

Oh, I think I was reading really widely and I did not have, I think in later years when I was a student at uni, for example, I developed a bit of snobbery around like, I, I really. Was into literary fiction at that point in time. But when I think back to my formative years of reading, I wasn't at all. I was really wide ranging as a reader. I loved, I mean, I even really got into the Twilight Series as a teenager and had no shame about that. And I think that was a great pathway to publishing in the sense that you have to let some of those prejudices go if you wanna work in publishing, you have to understand that there are so many different kinds of readers that seek out different kinds of books in different genres, and that's a good thing. And I, yeah. So I can't remember specific examples beyond that, but certainly I, I sought out all kinds of books. Mm

Natasha Rai:

mm So when you went to uni, did you do something that was like study-wise related to publishing or editing or creative

Tom Langshaw:

writing? I did publishing was probably the meeting point between my two majors in that I did at Sydney Uni, a media communications degree with an arts major in English literature. So I had always thought of publishing as this, this meeting point, but I wasn't quite sure how one entered that industry. It seemed from the outside. And it is a small, opaque industry. Yes. Uh, quite impenetrable. So I was lucky enough in the final year of my degree, my undergraduate degree, to, I had to do an internship as part of that degree. And one of the publicists at what was then Random House pre-merger with Penguin, uh, was a graduate that of that degree also, and was seeking out interns from. That cohort. And I don't think anyone else applied. I think everyone else in my cohort wanted to be journalists or they wanted to work in pr. Oh. And so I was the only candidate who applied for this internship and I got it and was lucky enough that it counted towards my course credits. So basically I started as an intern in the publicity department at Random House and did that for a few months. And then again, a lot of it is luck and timing. There was a project that the editorial team at Random House did an extra pair of hands-on, and I had shown in hindsight, what was maybe overzealous enthusiasm to uh, be a part of anything and everything that was on offer. So I helped out with that project for a few months and was lucky enough in that final year to also be working part-time by this point, so I could afford to do an extra few months of internship and basically by the end of that project. An assistant level role opened up as a PA to the publishing director. Um, I think maybe they felt bad for me and they just said, Hey, we'll throw a dog a bone. Um, here's an assistant level role. Do you want it? And I, I took it with both hands. Yes.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

So I was a PA and an editorial assistant for a couple of years, and then I was,

Natasha Rai:

and can I just ask something about that? Yeah. In that role, do you get to do like read manuscripts and do you get to kind of, not practice, but get that instinct and get, start getting that, um, experience of reading a certain way and editing and looking for certain things?

Tom Langshaw:

The best part about that assistant role was that as the PA to the publishing director, I was in all the acquisitions meetings, taking minutes, and all the covers meetings and the positioning meetings. Oh, so being a invaluable experience.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah,

Tom Langshaw:

absolutely. Being able to see how all those conversations. Took place from the very beginning was really instructive and demystifying and um, and quite empowering in a way because I think sometimes if you start as an editorial assistant without being, having that pa kind of element, you see how things work within one department. But at the larger houses in particular, the departments, so sales, publicity, marketing, editorial, publishing, everyone's quite siloed off. Um, and that's just an organizational dynamic, but I got to see how all those different departments interacted at those meetings. Mm-hmm. And who had input over what decisions.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

So I really enjoyed that.

Natasha Rai:

And at that time, what was, if you remember, like were there things that you learned or you experienced that you found really surprising?

Tom Langshaw:

I think I was surprised by. And, and again, I can only speak to Of course, yeah. Of the big experience. So it was at, what was by then Penguin Random House. So the largest trade publishing house, the largest of the big five publishers. Mm-hmm. Um, and seeing from the very get go how much input sales had over a lot of the decisions that were made and how ruthlessly commercial a lot of the business can be.'cause it is a business. And I think that was for someone who had, especially for those previous few years, been really wedded to the idea of capital L literature. Um, and had developed that kind of snobbery around literary fiction. Um, seeing the business side. And I think that is what publishing is, right? It's art and commerce in constant negotiation and tension. Um, but seeing how much that informed the decision making was a real eyeopener, um, from the very beginning. Um, I think I was also surprised by. How quickly trends came and went. Oh. And how quickly lessons were learned. And unlearnt, I'll never forget the year before the Dry by Jane Harper came out, there was this received wisdom that Australian crime novels that felt particularly Australian would not sell. And that was because the sense was that crime readers locally sought out novels set in larger cities like New York and London. Yeah. And they wanted that kind of global feel to them. But honestly, it took, and obviously I should say as well, there were books that had bucked that trend to some degree. But when you have a book like The Dryer that comes out and makes such an impact and has had so many imitators as well. Exactly.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

A whole and, and. Trend of Australian authored crime being successful continues to this day. So,

Natasha Rai:

well it's like a genre now in itself. Yeah,

Tom Langshaw:

absolutely. Um, Rural noir is a whole sub-genre and it took more than one book, but largely this book to shake that receipt with them and so all those orthodoxies can come and go. I think that's one of the things I enjoy most about publishing is there are these rules, but there are so often exceptions to the rule. And actually the capacity for this business to surprise you is, um, one of the more humbling but also exciting parts of the job.

Natasha Rai:

But also, you know, that's such an interesting thought because obviously the like sales team has a lot of say because they have to put together. How are they going to put the book out in the world, along with the publishers, et cetera. But then who gets to decide these rules? Like who, who has this initial thought of this type of book may not sell so well here, or this might do quite well? Like how, how has that come about?

Tom Langshaw:

To some degree, there is data that backs up these ideas and so BookScan is a tool that every publisher has that tracks most if not a hundred percent of book sales through the till at Australian stores. Mm-hmm. Retail channels. And that data can inform decision making and it's probably more useful in some genres than others. Um, for example, I dunno how useful it is in literary fiction to discuss it. It feels a bit apples and oranges sometimes to be discussing these two works alongside each other if they're experimenting or innovating with genre in different ways. Mm-hmm.

Natasha Rai:

Um.

Tom Langshaw:

That data does inform the decision making. Um, as I say, and publishers are constantly looking at how particular books have sold in the market. They're looking for, um, the right comparison titles that might frame a book's success within the market. Mm-hmm. If there is a precedent for this type of book, having performed well with a particular readership. Um, so there are, there is some basis to that decision making, but also it's a deeply speculative subjective industry. And, you know, speculation is at the core of it, right? It's this idea of publishers making lots of little, small bets with the books that they're acquiring and they're hoping that as many of them are gonna work out as possible, but there is no magic formula and. I think every publisher, which is, they knew what that magic formula was, but um, if we knew we'd be doing it all the time.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah, exactly. So, so then coming back to you, um, you were assistant, um, at, uh, pen, random House Penguin as well. So where, where from there did you then kind of get promoted up from there? What happened next?

Tom Langshaw:

Yeah, so I was promoted to editor, uh, after having been a PA and editorial assistant, and then I was promoted to senior editor and then in the depths of COVID, even though I loved editorial work, had a bit of a, a COVID crisis as everyone did. And I moved into audio production within Penguin Random House, which Oh, wow. Yeah, I, I was only there for a few months, not because I didn't enjoy it, and I did see it as quite complimentary to editorial work in a lot of ways. Um, and I think it was exciting to be in a part of the business that is, was and is growing. Um, but I was approached by Lex Hurst, a former colleague of mine from Penguin Random House, who had been at Pantera Press for a couple of years by then, Pantera being a Sydney based independent publisher. And Lex said to me, look, we're we're expanding our team. We would like a commissioning editor to come on board to acquire for our nonfiction list in particular, but also some fiction. And she interviewed me and they offered me the role. And I'd been at Penguin for I think about seven years, if not eight years, including the internship by this point. Wow. So it had been a long time there. And I'd, I'd loved it. I. Nothing against, um, the work or my colleagues. It was a great place to work, but um, by this point I did get the sense that if you are offered a commissioning role, they come up so rarely. They're really few and far between. And, um, for that reason I decided to move over, over to Pantera. And I also had wanted, I was curious about how things would work at an independent publisher having been at one of the larger houses for quite some time, um, just to get a sense of the publishing landscape from a different perspective. So I think I was curious about that as well. And so I was at Penter, well have been at Pantera ever since, but we were last year bought out by Hardy Grant, which is a larger Australian independent. So I've been at the largest, one of the smallest, and now somewhere in between. Mm-hmm. I've seen. Publishing on the inside, I would say from, from kind of large, small and medium sized. Medium.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. And, and obviously, well, it's not obvious, but it sounds obvious that you going from a senior editor to a commissioning publisher, you get a lot more responsibility and you also get more flexibility. Is that, would that be fair to say and choosing the books or the authors that you'd like to work with?

Tom Langshaw:

Yeah, certainly more autonomy in the projects you're working over. It's a big step though. I think it's certainly been the biggest step career wise because with editorial work, you are, there are very clearly defined boundaries around your role as an editor. You are handed over a manuscript usually, but not always. Once a structural edit has been completed and then you project manage or you directly do the copy, edit and, um. You'll work with a freelancer on a proofread, and then once the book is sent to print, your job has ended, you congratulate the author and then move on. You may, you may have a relationship continue with that author, but certainly there is no expectation for you to manage that relationship Yeah. On, on an ongoing basis. Mm-hmm. Whereas as a publisher, I said to you, the, the boundaries are quite porous in terms of what job you're doing on any given day. I mean, I was just this week at assigning at our warehouse with an author and I was on set at a shoot with them. Um, as well as this morning I spent a few hours reading a manuscript. So it's quite, it's a bit of everything. Yeah. I think it, it is a big step. So there's, there's a big step up in responsibility, but also the, the expectation that comes with that, but also the privilege that comes with that. Being able to shape your own list and be. A gatekeeper.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. Um, so let's get some gossip. So what are some, let's start with the worst. What are some of the worst experiences you've ever had with writers? You don't have to name names. You can, if you want. You don't have to,

Tom Langshaw:

to be completely honest. Okay. The worst ones, I probably should say publicly. Um, I mean, I can answer this in a positive way by stating the inverse, which is okay. That the best long term relationships I've had with authors feel mutually respectful, trusting, and collaborative at their core. I think the collaboration piece is such a, a publishing work, um, and where there's a great degree of ads and, but where also part of that respect means me as the publisher, respecting I have skin in the game, but also really respecting that it's the author's name on the book cover and that they have. More skin in the game than I do. Um, I mean, I will tell you one story has always stuck with me, which once an author asked me, I did interventionist edit on their nonfiction project. The book needed it. And well, I would, I would say that, wouldn't I? But I did quite a bit of work to this manuscript. And then when the author received it, they went on a call with me and said, Tom, I just have to ask, were you on drugs when you did this? Edit it. So over the top and not what I did. And yeah, so I mean, you can kind of see the lack of respect in that. Yeah, maybe they disagreed with some of the edits, which is of course fine and actually a necessary, I think part of the editorial process is just, and holding some kind of tension around that. Um, but yes, I think. One I that we are professionally trusting and respectful. Mm. And cool.

Natasha Rai:

And, and on that occasion, were you able to find a way forward together?

Tom Langshaw:

Do you remember? This was, yes, we did. Mm, we did. And I think often I've now learned to identify, and, and you know, that's a very extreme example, but of course I've had other examples where there's pushback from an author, and I do wish that as part of the process. I think again, it's, it's, the author's work at the, um, I did find a way forward, but I, I've, I've learnt over the years that quite often if an author feels, rightly or not, that they haven't been respected or their work hasn't been respected, feeling validated and heard. Is such an important part of that process and hearing an author out is really crucial to find a way. Often that doesn't mean committing to actually changing tack, but I think empathy goes a long way in those situations. For sure. Setting clear boundaries around what is professional communication. Yes,

Natasha Rai:

exactly. We say on this podcast is when we are talking to writers, like, you know, just take some time when you get feedback, especially editorial feedback, just sit on it for a day or something and just then go back to it.'cause initially it can be quite, uh, what's the word? Confronting or something'cause, you know, feedback or a criticism and it's just like, it's not, it's so not,

Tom Langshaw:

I often say take a few days. If I don't, if I get radio silence from an author after I've sent them a structural edit in particular, I think that's quite a healthy part of the process. Actually. As you say, I, I want an author to sit with it. And it, it, it is a process of, of moving beyond that initial knee jerk response. And I, it is entirely understandable and valid that someone is going to feel that way because the job of the editor is to provide constructive feedback. And also not all edits are sometimes Exactly. Sometimes they are really difficult to wade through. Sometimes they don't feel an edit has been provided in good faith. Yeah. And so, um, it, it is a bit of a negotiation, but even the best edits will require some degree of, um, internal negotiation to, to find the aspects that are gonna be most conducive to improving. Yeah.

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Natasha Rai:

What's the relationship like with literary agents and what's the relationship like with booksellers? Very different parts of the chain, right?

Tom Langshaw:

Yeah, very much so. Mm-hmm. So I would say I have a direct relationship with a lot of agents because they're the ones submitting me the work. And so yeah, that's a, that's a really important, um, relationship building. Part of my job is to have good relationships with, with agents and also knowing that I will work on different kinds of projects and authors with them over the lifetime of my career. Um, with booksellers, it's a bit more ad hoc, I would say, because the relationships in-house, within a publishing house with booksellers are mostly through, well, our sales team, because they sell directly to bookstores, particularly our, our sales reps in each state work directly with Indie booksellers. Yeah. Um, so they're the ones who have the relationships with, with the buyers and the floor staff at, so. Publicists do too, because publicists are putting on launches in bookstores as well. So they're the most, they're they're the primary points of contact Yeah. In a publishing house with booksellers. But certainly for any publisher taking their responsibility seriously to connect with readers, part of the job is connecting with booksellers. Mm. Um, and you know, I think the way that happens can change all the time. Sometimes it's through social media, sometimes it is through having your own local bookstore that you're connected to and affecting the work of their staff is tastemakers day in, day out. Um, and sometimes it's by going on tour or doing signings with an author and ing different stores, um, and hearing from. Booksellers directly about what's working and what's not and what readers are seeking out. I think it's always a really interesting part of the job because publishers can quite often be stuck in their office and not directly connecting with, um, yeah. With readers.

Natasha Rai:

And, um, in terms of how you read, do you read differently when you're reading for work and for pleasure?

Tom Langshaw:

Oh, big time. Mm-hmm. I do have people in my personal life ask me this question often, and I say, I can turn off that critical editorial capacity, like a switch, and I have, oh, wow. That's so cool. Well, I think a lot of publishers would feel that. I think, you know, to some degree, if I'm reading, I think, oh, you know, that's a, like any reader would, I think like, that's a bit farfetched or I don't quite connect with that character. Or like they, they're not three-dimensional enough, but I'm not. Thinking in the same forensic way I would as an editor, um, it would drive me to distraction to yes, do that. And I will say, I've noticed within the last few years, particularly since I started commissioning, if I, I'm working at any given point on more nonfiction, say day, I'm seeking out for, uh, for reading, for pleasure. Yeah. And, and I think that makes sense because I need an escape from, for sure, from the day job. And vice versa is true. If I'm working on, and particularly if I'm working intensively on some fiction edits

Natasha Rai:

mm-hmm.

Tom Langshaw:

Then I will seek out some nonfiction because I don't wanna, maybe, I don't wanna crowd. My mind with too many voices and characters if I'm really in an edit.

Natasha Rai:

Hmm. So into want to submit either to you as in a publisher or an agent, what are some things they can do to help themselves in terms of editing? Like what kind of eye can they bring to their own work?'cause I know not all writers can be good editors and Cool.

Tom Langshaw:

That's a good question. I do think, and maybe this is not the most helpful bit of advice, but I do think the ability to hear constructive feedback as a writer is really crucial. And whether that's through a writing group or beta readers, um, reader in a relatively safe space, I think they are really, really healthy. That still is being part of a community of mm-hmm hmm. That also is somewhat, uh, that somewhat preempts what a relationship with an agent and a publisher would be like as well. So it's good preparation.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. And it's also helpful because if you are asking somebody to read your work, you are getting yourself how it's landing. Because if you're writing for yourself, great. That's totally different to writing for an intended audience or someone you have in mind. So,

Tom Langshaw:

exactly right. And a lot of, uh, it's, it's fair for a lot of editors to cop this criticism. I think quite often editors are good at identifying when something isn't working, but their solutions may not necessarily be right. And that's because you as the writer know this world inside out. You've built it up brick by brick. Mm

Natasha Rai:

mm

Tom Langshaw:

And I do think just having that experience in, in different settings, maybe more informal settings like a, a writer's group can helpful in, if not point exactly towards how you fix the problem, pointing out where those problems might lie and, and being receptive to hearing that.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. Have you ever wanted to write.

Tom Langshaw:

No, particularly since I started editing, so much of my day is reading and as I say, I still have the capacity to read for pleasure. Outside of that, that the thought of writing alongside it, I don't, I think I just don't have the capacity for it mentally. Um, but also I think I really like work on this side of things. I really like the behind the scenes aspect of the work. I really like having those collaborative relationships, but I've never, no, no, not since maybe, no, I don't think I've really written anything since my honest thesis that's of any kind of,

Natasha Rai:

so given that you're reading so much new material, what are like some really common mistakes that you come across from like, especially emerging writers who are submitting?

Tom Langshaw:

So I would say the. It's easier for me to speak to the common errors in pitching rather than the manuscripts, because the manuscripts are often doing so many different things that it's hard to speak generally, but what I can do is speak to common errors I see in pitching. Mm-hmm. I mean, number one, and it amazed me how often this would happen at both error, but starting a pitch letter already of publishing workers are women. Um, huge. No-no. And it goes without saying, but you'd be surprised how often that happens. Oh gosh. So don't do that, but also do your research about the publisher. I think sometimes people don't realize how obvious it is that they've done a copy paste job across picture and agents. Mm. Um, so being able to tailor the messaging a little bit based on some of the books that the publishing house has published or. Their position within the market, the way that you pitch to the largest commercial house is gonna be quite different from an indie, for example, but also maybe a book doesn't belong at every publisher and there's a reason for that. Finding out where the best fit could be to start with, um, can really help. And likewise with agents, actually, I always say if you're unsure about which agent to pitch, to look at the acknowledgement section of some of your favorite Australian authored works, and they will often mention their agent in the back. Um, and, and it can be a book within the same genre, say, but it also can just be a book that you admire. A lot of agents work across different genres. Yes. Mm-hmm. And, and some will quite directly say whether or not they're accepting as within a particular genre that you're writing in. Um, I also quite regularly take pitches at. The Society of Authors runs all literary Oh yes.

Natasha Rai:

Dating, yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

Event a few times a year. So I've done those for a few years now. And they are really good at preparing writers to give a succinct pitch that touches on most of the elements a publisher wants upfront. And they help you prioritize the information as well. So they will let you know that a publisher wants to hear about the genre that you're writing in the word count, the comp titles, which I think is always an interesting thing. And we can talk about that for a moment here. Hmm, please. So comp titles are comparative comparison titles. Um, so they're books that you could see yours sitting alongside on books still bookstore shelves, essentially.

Natasha Rai:

Mm-hmm.

Tom Langshaw:

So whether they're doing a thing in terms of genre, say, um, and I think a publish. An agent doesn't necessarily need your comp to be perfectly accurate.

Natasha Rai:

Mm.

Tom Langshaw:

But what they are looking for is that you've thought about writing for a readership and that you've thought about the market to some degree, and that you've thought about the process of professionally published work, which means it will have a cover, it will have a marketing campaign that leads it into a particular direct. And so I think comp titles are, I often am frustrated by them because I think they can be quite off limiting in terms of what the industry continues to put out there. And I think a lot of publishers feel the same about it, but they are a useful shorthand within different departments within a publishing house. But then sales team goes to speak to booksellers. They're a really useful shorthand as well. So they are a bit of a necessary evil of the industry. And so. Leading with those comp titles in a pitch can be really helpful because a lot of writers who are maybe just starting out, I often see the refrain in pitch letters of this is like nothing out there that you've ever seen, or I've written this entirely for myself. And those maybe true, but also as a publisher wanting to enter a collaborative creative process with you are not so helpful.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. And so maybe if you are playing with form or genre or something that is fairly new, it might be a good idea to then find like, you know, Jane Harper meets whatever.

Tom Langshaw:

Absolutely. You can find a meeting point of two different comparisons. Or you could even just say literary experimentation. Reminiscent of Nice. Yeah. These two novels. Yeah. And I think that will give a sense for say, the playfulness of the work, um, or its satirical, bent, or, um. It's darkness or whatever it is. Mm. Tonally sometimes, um, or in terms of ambition, pumps can lead you in those directions rather than just being, rather than just directly mapping onto what you're trying to do.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. Yeah. That's really, that's really, really good. That's really useful because I know I've struggled in the past with comp titles, um, and I ended up kind of doing that, this, this at meets this because that felt Yeah. The most. Yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

Um, yeah. Which I think often people do, and that's, that's quite helpful too.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. Yeah. And so in, you know, we've talked about emerging writers. Have you come across things that may be more established writers in terms of mistakes or, yeah, like even like people looking for their publishing deal for their second or third books.

Tom Langshaw:

Mm-hmm. I think, um, the main mistake I see is people not remembering that it's a small industry and. You don't wanna burn bridges because everyone talks, and that's not just publishers, but festival programmers and booksellers all book and, and you order your many years, um, to work within this industry for better and worse. And I'm not saying that's necessarily always a good setup and but that's

Natasha Rai:

right now the way it is,

Tom Langshaw:

right? It is the way it is. Yeah. Yeah. Um, and I think just maybe by extension be a marathon, not a sprint. Publishing is a really long game and success, whatever it means to you may take a long time to fully realize. Um, and this is maybe a bit of a tangent, I think there can be a temptation to follow trends and try different things like a TikTok or, and trying to grow an audience and readership that way. Um, but I think if it's not authentic, it probably won't work. You need to, there's a real, you need to have a commitment to really see these people have to be connecting with the work that you're doing.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. Very true. Speaking of trends, what are you noticing right now in the industry in Australia? Yeah, I mean it's,

Tom Langshaw:

the trend is a bit of a dispiriting one, which is, it's been a really difficult couple of years.

Natasha Rai:

Mm-hmm. Uh,

Tom Langshaw:

with the economy being in the state it's been in. Mm-hmm. And I mean, I have a particular agenda here. Having worked at an independent publisher that, that now, and now working for a larger but still independent publisher. Last year we saw two other independent houses be swallowed up by Yes. Multinational corporate publishers. I think that's. A broader industry trend that's worrying me in the landscape right now is having authors and agents having fewer publishers to submit to and fewer independent publishers particularly. And I think there are some emerging conversations around how we have quite a resilient, independent book selling sector in Australia, certainly compared to the US and the uk. Mm. And hopefully that remains the case for many years to come, and I think there are increasing conversations being had around how independent publishers and booksellers can support each other. Sure. Um, I, I mean, look, in terms of, in terms of book trends, I think there have been a few like recession indicators in the world of books. So often AIST fiction is a really big indicator. Um, we've seen. And again, this is speaks so generally as to almost, yeah, yeah, be useful. But fiction sales have been rising nonfiction less so. And I think that's an interesting, that is interesting in print at least. Yeah. That is the case. Um, so I mean that's something interesting to watch. We've also, even just the last few months there's this cozy coloring trend and we've seen be, become a thing. So I mean, a lot of these developments speak to people seeking out comfort at a time when the world is feeling particularly difficult and volatile. And I guess that's no surprise really. Um, but I hope that the market shifts and I think there are some potentially promising signs that it would. But yeah, certainly preserving independent publishing in Australia, um, is. Something that I feel

Natasha Rai:

quite passionate about. Mm-hmm. And you know, there's that mate you mentioned and you also very, um, helpfully good advice on pictures. Is there any advice or tips that you can give to emerging writers in terms of the manuscript level or the work itself?

Tom Langshaw:

I think it can be a difficult balance. Sometimes I hear pictures from authors who, and I know I just said I want an author to have ideally received some form of feedback before they submit. But it's a fine balance because I also get authors sometimes pitched to me and they say of edits and I've engaged preve feedback and I do think you run the risk of over script sometimes. So I think it, you know, there's a happy medium between those two, between never having been read, but also having reworked 10 times over. Yeah. I. I mean, I think for fiction, so much of it comes out to voice and character and that's, that's what I'm really looking for, that standout voice. Um, I also think, and I know I've just spoken about trends, but I do think trend chasing quite often doesn't work.'cause again, people feel the inauthenticity of that and publishing is a long game and you are making your name in a particular genre or sub-genre. Mm-hmm. You may get diminishing returns on that. Well, I

Natasha Rai:

was gonna say,'cause it is such a long process that by the time you think, oh, that's quite hot right now, I'm gonna write something like that, by the time you might get a deal two, three years down the track, so.

Tom Langshaw:

Exactly. And is that what you want to be doing longer term? If you're actually passionate about something else entirely. Mm. Then a publisher may have a certain expectation that you would continue in your lane for Yeah. The next few books at least. So how do you. How do you manage that over the long term? I think thinking strategically at times about what you really want to be doing

Natasha Rai:

Yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

From the outset is important.

Natasha Rai:

So Tom, would you ever like, take a gamble or be interested in, in a manuscript that say, had a very strong voice and really good characterization, but might be not as strong, let's say, polite or structure, would you like, do you have that eye or do you use that kind of thinking of, you know what, there's so many good elements in this will get there and I'm willing to take the risk by take, you know, doing this work.

Tom Langshaw:

I think quite often that internal negotiation for a publisher, it does come down to how passionate you are about the project and there are some real passion picks that you really want to drive through an acquisitions beating. And you feel like even if a team doesn't fully see the vision here I do and I wanna really, I wanna really back it. Yeah. So that does happen every so often. I think as, as a publisher, you have to be very smart about. And you also have to acknowledge the time to effort ratio involved with a work like that. So you wouldn't wanna be doing that for every book that you are Sure. Commissioning in a calendar year, but you certainly could do it say a couple of times. Mm. If you really see it then and you see that you are the right editor to get it there, the author is on board with that, then could do that work over mul, multiple structural.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. And does it matter to you if somebody has had anything published, like short pieces or anything, like, does that count for you?

Tom Langshaw:

Oh, I think particularly for more literary writers, someone has built up a literary resume of sorts by submitting to being published, even being shortlisted, winning literary prizes in literary magazine say, or different, um, different literary platforms. That can be great. And I, I often say to writers to lead with that because it shows that your work is being recognized and received well. Um, so no, I don't think it's a hindrance. It can quite often be a help. And as to whether, I mean, say someone's self-published a work before, I don't think that necessarily is, unless the book has totally taken the world by storm. And then there's, I mean, even then that's not a bad thing actually. Mm-hmm. But I think sometimes if you're wanting to launch them as a day, um, then, you know, potentially there's kind of a, a, a question around how you do that. If they've have self-published. Yeah. Yeah. Um, but no, I don't think it is necessarily an issue.

Natasha Rai:

So, is Pantera Press currently open for submissions?

Tom Langshaw:

I knew you would ask this and I should have come prepared with a better answer. I don't think at the moment we are, but I know that's only because. There's an ongoing conversation within Hardie Grant, um, about how we're setting up submissions across our multiple divisions and a bit of a watch this space answer.

Natasha Rai:

Okay. So for people listening, just keep checking, right? Yeah, I think so. Yeah.

Tom Langshaw:

Keep checking the website. We'll, at some point,

Natasha Rai:

update, and you will also might be next year doing some of those a SA speed dating things again.

Tom Langshaw:

Yes, and I also like recently did a pitching session with the Emerging Writers Festival. Um, so I'm often popping up at different

Natasha Rai:

pictures. Yeah. So people should just keep an eye on those websites and those sites to get info.

Tom Langshaw:

Yeah, and I think even if they don't lead to an offer or a deal. Their invaluable professional experience to be Oh, for sure. Yeah. In front of an agent. Yeah. Or a publisher pitching a book.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah. And even if you get some feedback around this needs a bit more work, or, you know, think about that. That's huge. Yeah. That's huge. Um, so final question, hopefully a bit of a fun one. Uh, what have been your favorite reads this year, including any debuts? I find it so I know

Tom Langshaw:

it's so hard. I find it so hard to answer, not least because I am not good at tracking my reading in any way. And so I often answer my default answer is the last book I read. And in this case it was a really good book, but it's also not a particularly, uh, interesting answer maybe. But I read Hamlet by Maggie O'Farrell and I love that book. It was my first time reading Maggie O'Farrell, and I'm reading it in part because I will be seeing. The film when it comes out. Oh, yes. Mm-hmm. And I wanted to read the novel first, of course. Mm-hmm. And I was, I think maybe structurally, I think there's a conversation around how meandering the book is at times, but I think she immerses you in that world successfully, that it doesn't matter. And I think it's a beautiful portrait of, Anne Hathaway in particular. Um, but the thing that makes the book for me is the last 10 to 15 pages, the final scene are so indelibly marked in my mind now that it's, it's so, and I'm really interested'cause it's quite an interior moment, that final moment in the novel. I, I've heard that the film has this resonant ending, but I don't quite know how they're gonna translate that.

Natasha Rai:

Mm.

Tom Langshaw:

Um, so anyway, I, I really enjoyed Hamnet

Natasha Rai:

is my answer to that question. Oh, that, okay then. No, thank you. I love, I'm I'll read anything through. Right. So I'm very happy with that answer. Did you, did you love Hamnet as well? I loved it. I absolutely loved it. Um, but I'm a huge Mag a Farrell fan, so yeah. Did you read, um, oh, we can cut this out if you say no, but, um, did you read Charlotte McConaghy

Tom Langshaw:

Wild Dark Shore? Yeah, I did. Yeah. What'd you think of it?

Natasha Rai:

I loved it.

Tom Langshaw:

Yeah, I loved it too because I've read all three of hers and I think same. Yeah, this was the most successful for me.

Natasha Rai:

Mm-hmm. Like,

Tom Langshaw:

I mean, I love all of her novels, but this felt the most fully realized and the most,'cause she obviously marries genre plotting with, like, it kinda has that mystery thriller edge to her and the romance subplot as well with, with literary prose. And I think it does the best job of that. It's, it's stunning.

Natasha Rai:

Yeah, I agree. Yeah. Um, so even though I already said final question, this is the final, final question, books that are coming out with Pantera next year that you're really excited about.

Tom Langshaw:

Oh, cut this silence.

Natasha Rai:

Cut

Tom Langshaw:

to

Natasha Rai:

silence.

Tom Langshaw:

I've gotta, yeah. I mean, I'm, the tricky thing about my job sometimes is I'm working in so many different timelines. Yes, yes. I'm kind of not sure where we are and where the calendar year for 2026 begins. So let me just have a quick think about which month

Natasha Rai:

we're in October.

Tom Langshaw:

Yes. I have an answer. Oh, yay. Okay. Okay. So I have a, a fiction answer and a nonfiction answer to this question. Fantastic. So, a novel I'm excited about is one I'm that my colleague Lex is publishing for the Pan Terrace. Um, Sasha Wesley is an author from WA and I know Alexis been her for quite some time and her new novel releasing in April, who made it Oxford in the 1920, A Secret Society of Women. Basically stealing books from libraries and, and like band books at that. So it's this, and the main character is from Australia. And there there's another character also not from the uk. So there's this slightly feminist, anti-colonial take on knowledge and who gets to own knowledge and control the production of knowledge. Um, but it's also just a very charming, evocative story of a fish out of water, an Australian in Oxford. And, um, yeah, I, I really enjoy that one. Um, on the nonfiction side, we are publishing a memoir called Juicy by a writer called Shari Joseph, who is part of the sweatshop ey movement out of Western Sydney. Mm-hmm. And Shari has written this really bold generation defining work around, so she, in her early thirties. Realized that the script that had been set out for her, particularly around marriage and motherhood, was most likely not going to be her path for various reasons. And she had to reimagine what adulthood would look like. And it's a memoir, but it's also partly a manifesto about the juicy life and being able to extract the juice and the joy from life even when all your expectations have been. So part of that is she goes on this amazing trip to Europe where she, she, she writes beautifully in this very, and I mean this in a complimentary way, this eat, pray, love way about travel and about hedonism and, and then coming back to Australia and the joy of in community, being an auntie figure. And it's an amazing, it's really wow. Really powerful and. I'm really excited to see it continue to take shape. Worried edits at the moment. And I know she's working away at it, but it's um, it's a great one.

Natasha Rai:

Those both, both them sound so good. Thank you. Yeah, we're very excited about them. Um, so Tom, thank you so much for taking the time. I know you've been really busy, so I really appreciate and thank you for all your excellent advice. Oh, thanks for having me, Tash. Having reflected on my chat with Tom Langshaw, I'm setting a couple of intentions, uh, for writers out there with projects. So Tom, uh, talked about how important voice is and how he and many other publishers usually read the first 50 pages. So if you look at your work, especially the first 50 pages, checkout. What your voice sounds like. Check out your characters. Check out your protagonist, check out your antagonist and see if the voice is strong. And a few ways to do that is you can read them out loud and see how it sounds out loud if you're struggling between telling and showing, because that is something that people talk about a lot. Write some scenes. Uh, both in both ways. So write it telling and write it showing and see what works better for you. The other thing that Tom talked about is, uh, having the right fit for your work in terms of publishers and agents. So he recommended you could look at the acknowledgement sections of books to see agents that, um, writers may have thanked. The other way you can do it is to go onto agents' websites and have a look at the writers that they represent. Um, also you can go into your local bookshop. Pick up your favorite titles and have a look at who publishes them. If you want to submit direct directly to publishers, of course, a less intensive way is to go on different websites and check out the titles that publishers do publish. And lastly, I think reading widely. Um, if you're somebody who reads widely already, great. Um, I know that it can be sometimes difficult to read outside a specific genre if that is your love, and that's totally fine. But see if you can every now and then set yourself a little challenge. That may be one different type of book per month or something like that that you might want to read, just to see things like story and voice and structure and see how other people might do that. Thanks for listening.

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