Muein Mystery School Adventures

EPISODE 4: Darkness of the Storm

Jeffrey Marks Season 1 Episode 4

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Giovanni’s father runs Elouan off the property, accusing him of being possessed by the devil.  Meanwhile, Rachel witnesses the full ravaging effects of the plague on the city’s populace.  Her experience with Elouan makes her wonder if he might be able to help her closest friends, but first she must find a way out of the city, as the town’s gate has been closed for the new purpose of quarantine.

MUSIC ACCREDITATION TO:
 | Alon Peretz - A Forest Dark
 | Alon Peretz - All Hope Abandon
 | Alon Peretz - Fire and Ice
 | Alon Peretz - Kings Requiem
 | Alon Peretz - Pleasure and Pain
 | Amit Weiner - Mountain of Doom
 | Ardie Son - Sunken Days
 | Birraj - Figments
 | DaniHaDani - Secret No 3
 | Dr. Paranoid - 1989 The Prequel
 | Hagai Davidoff - Until We Meet Again
 | Ian Post - The Hollow
 | Idokay - Cicada Killer
 | Jan Sanejko - New Lands
 | Master Minded - Bliss
 | Matthias Forster - Gate to Eternity
 | Matthias Forster - Prophecy
 | Matthias Forster - With Odins Help
 | Maya Belsitzman & Matan Ephrat - The Horizon
 | Quinten Coblentz - Genesis
 | Roie Shpigler - Lockdown
 | Roie Shpigler - The Dark Forest
 | Stephen Keech - The Progression of Time
 | Tilman Sillescu - Courage and Strength
 | Tilman Sillescu - Wait and See
 | Timan Sillescu - There is No Time

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 EXT. JUNCTION - DAY

               The duke's event was enough to convince Amiria and Herault 
               not to return to the city for Mass the following weeks. It 
               was clear, other members of the farming community were also 
               avoiding the town. They did their best to distract themselves 
               with the chores of the fields, but couldn't ignore the ringing 
               of the cathedral bell in response to announcing a 
               parishioner's death. After a few weeks, the chiming seemed 
               non-stop. What's more, Elouan noticed an influx of more 
               carrion birds flying near. He could also sense the rise of 
               emotional grieving from the walled village.

               As he stood atop the hillside staring down at the city, it 
               appeared the sky itself seemed to mourn. Heavy gray clouds 
               hung like a thick blanket, blocking out the sun, while a 
               flight of crows swirled above the city.

               Elouan sunk his feet deeper into the earth, rooting himself, 
               hoping the grounding would give him the strength needed as 
               he sensed the heaviness of death bloating. He knew the stench 
               of rot was already present within the town's walls, otherwise 
               there wouldn't be so many crows scouting. He mentally reached 
               for the birds, hoping to catch a glimpse of what they might 
               be seeing by blending into their essences. It wasn't easy. 
               Already distracted by the virulence of the pestilence itself, 
               he struggled to push the horror aside from his mind in order 
               to shift awareness to the crows.

               (First only a single crow cawed, but the others soon 
               followed).  The birds swiftly coalesced into a fantastic, 
               unified organism and darted toward the hillside, looking 
               like a gigantic black undulating wave preparing to strike in 
               a calamitous tsunami.

               Giovanni and Fina rose up from the field, stunned at what 
               they were witnessing.  The rest of Giovanni's family also 
               took note. Amiria gaped in a silent scream.

               Elouan held steady. The cluster swelled, sending livestock 
               and farmers scrambling.

                                     AMIRIA
                         Get in the house!

                                     HERAUT
                         Run!

               Fina fell to her knees and covered her head in the hopes she 
               might be shielded from the assault.

               The swarm dispersed seconds before slamming into Elouan. 
               They spread out in a colossal fan of fluttering black rays, 
               as if the Muein Guardian were wearing some kind of invisible 
               armor which forced them to veer around him.

               Fina stood and passed an awed look with Giovanni. They simply 
               couldn't comprehend what their eyes were telling them. Elouan 
               remained unharmed in the center of an apocalyptic whirlpool 
               of avian. The horde circled around him like the funnel of a 
               tornado, then stretched away from his crown like pulled resin 
               being drawn back into the sky.  Within moments, the horizon 
               of the hillside cleared, with the Alpine guardian remaining 
               steadfast and completely untouched.

               Fina brought a fist to her chest - a literal movement of her 
               heart captured by him.

               Heraut raced out of the cottage with a hatchet raised above 
               his head.

                                     HERAUT
                         You're the Devil!

                                     GIOVANNI
                         No!  No!  You don't want to do that!

                                     ELOUAN
                         I am no devil.  But in knowing how 
                         you fear me -- no matter how misplaced -- 
                         I shall leave you.

                                     GIOVANNI
                         No!

                                     HERAUT
                         Guillaume, get his stuff.

               Guillaume, along with Amiria and the remaining children, had 
               stayed trembling in the cottage doorway watching the assault 
               unfold. Guillaume warily stepped out and headed toward the 
               sheep barn. He cast a grim face, worried if Elouan might 
               exact some sort of curse for assisting in removing him from 
               the premises.

                                     HERAUT
                         You do things that are holy unnatural.  
                         Only possessed by Satan can you be.

                                     ELOUAN
                         Is it not more unnatural to sever 
                         the fingers from your own hand, as 
                         you have done of yourself from the 
                         other organs of the body we call 
                         earth?  Flowers do not bloom without 
                         the solicitation from the bees.  
                         These are not two separate things, 
                         but the action of a united organism.  
                         You separate yourself from all else, 
                         in a very unbalanced, selfish way.  
                         You look down upon nature, without 
                         the realization that you are actually 
                         part and parcel of it and communicate 
                         with it at every level.  If you truly 
                         believe you are disconnected, what 
                         poison that breeds, and when taken 
                         to its greatest extreme, you will 
                         only fulfill that belief by 
                         permanently disconnecting yourself 
                         through the ending of your own life.  
                         For many, this process has just begun.  
                         I implore you, your God may be your 
                         Father, but don't ignore your equally 
                         valid connection to your Mother, who 
                         has brought form to your Father's 
                         Great Spirit ... through all this.  
                         Do not think there is emptiness 
                         between the space of my skin to yours, 
                         or your spirit to that of any living 
                         thing.  That is a trick of the eyes, 
                         and confuses your mind.

               Guillaume returned with Elouan's sack. He kept a safe distance 
               as he handed it over. Elouan took it without any offense, 
               instead gazing warmly at Giovanni.

                                     ELOUAN
                         Stay safe.  During this pestilence, 
                         remain to yourself.  If one of you 
                         gets sick, all of you may be in 
                         danger.  This is the overall result 
                         coming THROUGH nature ... of poison.

               (MARCHING OFF)

               INT.  COBBLER SHOP - DAY

               As the owner of the cobblery, Umfrey wasn't sure how much 
               longer to risk offering services.  He and Rachel glanced at 
               the closed door, imagining what despair must lie on the other 
               side. The elder turned his focus on the pair of dusty sandals 
               hanging on the wall before him.

                                     UMFREY
                         Sweet love, help them if you can.

                                     RACHEL
                         Poppa...?

                                     UMFREY
                         It has already been more than a week 
                         since the Chaveu boys passed, and 
                         two weeks since deWary's wife, and 
                         we are fine.

                                     RACHEL
                         But the bells ring more and more 
                         every day.

                                     UMFREY
                         We are not sinners.  God will protect 
                         us.

               Rachel hoped he was right, but it did not still the turmoil 
               tossing about her inner spirit. Neither she nor her father 
               had visited friends or others since the duke's party. They 
               continued to attend Mass, but came and left as soon as 
               possible, noting with each passing week how many more pews 
               were sitting empty. Rachel dreadfully worried that the ringing 
               of the bell could be for the death of Sarah, or maybe even 
               Clarice. How was she to know? Alas, it appeared the tolling 
               echoed for many.

               She suddenly rationalized that if God protected her because 
               of her piety, then she needn't remain prisoner within the 
               walls closing in. She nabbed a dried bouquet of flowers left 
               from weeks earlier and planted them firmly to her nose.

                                     UMFREY
                         Rachel!

               (DOOR SLAM)

               EXT.  MAIN ROAD - DAY - MOMENTS LATER

               She hurried into the street, then abruptly stopped as a parade 
               of mourners passed.  The small size of the casket being 
               carried on the shoulders of the survivors suggested the 
               remains of a child. But they weren't the only ones. Just an 
               arm's throw away, another string of mourners followed a larger 
               casket, though this one was clearly made at the last minute 
               from scraps of tossed wood.

               Rachel peered down the street to see a handful of people 
               fleeing from their apartments. Even more disturbing, they 
               appeared to be leaving alone instead of having their spouse 
               or kin alongside. She ran to gather answers but skidded to a 
               stop when something caught her attention from the alley: 
               three bodies, sprawled haphazardly along the ground.

               She hesitated (breathing in two powerful breaths) ... then 
               cautiously stepped forward.

               As the cadavers came more clearly in view, they appeared 
               black and twisted. The blackness charred toes and fingers, 
               and the warping of the bodies made Rachel believe they had 
               to be in unbelievable pain when they collapsed. She noted 
               one of the shirtless corpses displayed a trio of ghastly 
               carbuncles protruding from the armpit like a grotesque 
               mountain range. Another had two large ringed welts near his 
               groin, seen only because vermin had eaten holes in the 
               trousers-the scavenging cut short by their own deaths, as 
               Rachel spotted rodent carcasses only feet away (one had 
               incriminating fabric still stuck in its mouth). Both bodies 
               were also splattered with the dark, pitted plague rash.

               A cloud of flies buzzed around the third corpse. The long 
               hair, coiled below the shoulders, clotted with blood near 
               the tips, as well as on the chemise, revealed the remains as 
               being a woman.

               The overwhelming smell turned the sweetness of the flowers 
               into a vapor that constricted and roiled the stomach.  Rachel 
               buried her nose deeper into the bouquet and sprinted in an 
               about-face from the alley. The stench lessened when she 
               returned to the wider stretch of the cobblestone thoroughfare.

                                     APARTMENT MAN
                         You can't leave him here!  He's your 
                         brother!

               Rachel saw a young woman abandon an apartment, running for 
               her life. The person screaming was the girl's neighbor. The 
               portly gentlemen sneered, disgusted with the lady's 
               insensitivity, BUT then heard the coughing next door.  And 
               then there was the smell. He winced when it hit.

                                     SICK NEIGHBOR
                         Gerold ...

               The summons made the neighbor stiffen. He suddenly buried 
               his face into the crook of his elbow to protect against the 
               sickening odor.

                                     SICK NEIGHBOR
                         Don't let me die alone ... Mother 
                         and Father are here ... but gone.  
                         Just yesterday.

               In a flash, the neighbor changed from scorning the sister to 
               embracing her terror.  

               The stricken man collapsed in the shadow of the doorway and 
               fell onto his back.  

               Rachel took a triple dose of deep flowery fragrance, then 
               hustled down the street. She spotted a pair of dirty, low-
               class men hauling a litter of three bodies. The carriers had 
               their faces wrapped in cloth, yet in contrast, clothes barely 
               hung upon their bones. Still, they wore leather gloves for 
               some touch of protection.

               Then the smoke drowned her, enveloping Rachel like a dank 
               fog. It came out of nowhere, blinding and smothering her 
               from all sides. She waved frantically to clear the thick 
               mist, then noted it smelled of sweet wood and grasses. As 
               pockets of the fumes spiraled and began to clear, a terrifying 
               figure emerged from the billowing cloud. The intruder wore a 
               heavy black cloak that fell all the way to the feet, gloves 
               that stretched up to the shoulders, and a wide-brimmed hat 
               atop the mask of what looked like the face of a colossal 
               bird. He waved a lantern of smoldering incense, creating the 
               dense haze.

                                     DOCTOR MASCI
                         Stay inside.  Protect yourself.

                                     RACHEL
                         Doctor Masci, is that you?

                                     DOCTOR MASCI
                         Yes!

                                     RACHEL
                         How many have died?  How many?

                                     DOCTOR MASCI
                         This miasma is causing great 
                         mortality.  It is not safe to breathe 
                         the air.

                                     RACHEL
                         Are you sure that is the cause?

                                     DOCTOR MASCI
                         Smell the fall-out from the latrines 
                         if you have to, but do not let this 
                         corrupted breeze lodge into your 
                         lungs.  If you can get out of the 
                         city and go to the countryside, then 
                         do it.

               Rachel shoved him aside and darted for the next block. Similar 
               to her own father's shop, a few businesses were open, but 
               kept their doors closed with signs reading, Open-Knock first. 
               Masks required. Others said, Open-If you have been near the 
               sick, stay away. But these were few and far between. Most 
               businesses were shuttered.  Closed due to illness, the signs 
               read, or were simply marked with a large painted "X" on the 
               door. Not that there were many people wandering in search of 
               trade. The street was practically abandoned from its usual 
               density of patrons, the deaths mounting with each passing 
               day for the last few weeks.

               There were a handful willing to risk the trek. They held 
               thick bouquets of flowers to their faces or dabbing spices 
               on the tops of their hands and keeping the smell firmly at 
               their nostrils. A few hung their heads in disappointment at 
               their favorite business being closed, while others knocked 
               frantically on the doors of those who were open, more likely 
               to get swiftly off the street rather than purchase any 
               treasures. A food market was open, with a single vendor 
               tending to the meager two or three patrons rushing swiftly 
               to find a few morsels and dash away.  Everyone had their 
               faces wrapped in cloth up to their eyes.

               EXT. NOTARY SHOP

               The only cluster of mass individuals appeared to be 
               congregating outside the door of the notary, who produced 
               wills and testaments. There were a dozen people waiting. 
               Some had faces hidden behind cloth masks, others plunged 
               their noses into hastily arranged bouquets, some sniffed 
               flasks of spices. Anxiety clung to all.

               (Coughing in the line).  One of the people abandoned the 
               group and grabbed a rock to throw at the people coughing.

               All of a sudden, a trio in the line coughed. One of them, a 
               man named Thomas, shook to such an extent that the bouquet 
               he held fell away from his face, revealing his mouth covered 
               with spittle. He looked feverish. Another man, still in good 
               health, abandoned the group and grabbed a rock to throw at 
               him.

                                     MAN IN LINE
                         Get away!

                                     WOMAN IN LINE
                         Don't infect us!  Go die in your 
                         home!

                                     THOMAS
                         I promise, I don't have the bump ... 
                         or the rosies.  My family's 
                         inheritance.  It must be signed.

                                     MAN IN LINE
                                 (coughing)
                         I'm not sick.  The flowers you are 
                         carrying ... always make it hard for 
                         me to breathe.

                                     MAN IN LINE
                         Go home and die, cumberworld!

               (ROCKS HITTING).

                                     MAN IN LINE
                         Mercy!

               (HEAVY COUGHING.  FALL AND BATTERING).

               Another stumbled into the street, then collapsed to his knees 
               (LAUGHING HYSTERICALLY).  His eyes rolled up, then he tumbled 
               into the piss gutter   revealing a bubo swelling on his neck.

                                     MAN IN GUTTER
                         Forgive my sins, oh Father.
                                 (death - CHURCH BELL)

               The gathering splintered as the healthy ran away in terror, 
               leaving behind four dead and two beaten. The bruised duo 
               stumbled off in separate directions, (mumbling incoherently 
               with an occasional shout to the heavens).  Who really was 
               sick within the melee, Rachel couldn't tell. The spectacle 
               happened so quickly; she could only watch in dumbfounded 
               awe.

               The notary opened his door to investigate. Torment rushed 
               over him as he spotted the bodies and realized what had 
               happened.

               (More wailing from) Three funeral processions flooded in. 
               Rachel shared a horrified look with the notary, the 
               disintegration of the world happening before them. No sooner 
               had they acknowledged the predicament, a loud groan from the 
               portcullis rumbled out.

               EXT.  CITY GATE - DAY

               A gathered crowd shouted at the tower watchmen.  (The cries 
               burgeoned when the gate banged fully closed).  A team of 
               archers from atop the turrets angled bows at the rioters, 
               while other sentries did their best to push the mob back.

                                     REFUGEE #1
                         Open the gate!  You cannot leave us 
                         in here.

                                     ARCHER #1
                         Quarantine, by order of the city 
                         council.  No one in or out.  We cannot 
                         risk the fields and farmers.

                                     REFUGEE #2
                         But we are not sick.

                                     REFUGEE #3
                         You close that gate and you condemn 
                         us to die with these wretched --

                                     WATCHMAN #1
                         Return to your homes.  Now!

               (Several refugees thrust forward to overcome the Watchmen).

               (Archers shoot into the melee, impaling a handful.  SHRIEKS 
               explode from the assault, as if the mob thought the archers 
               were bluffing).

               EXT.  ANOTHER MAIN ROAD - DAY

               William, like Rachel, couldn't handle the isolation with his 
               family in the apartment. Besides, he trusted Elouan's crystal. 
               No doubt, it would protect him from the sickness, he reasoned. 
               He also pondered if the amulet's power expanded to include 
               the whole of his family, as no one exhibited any signs of 
               the pestilence. He felt confident it would remain so.  For 
               William's parents, they accepted they were under God's good 
               graces and thus spared.  This in no way diminished their 
               compassion and worry for friends. It even brought a sense of 
               conditioned security; so long as they remained pious, prayed, 
               gave alms and did whatever else Bishop Jean said was necessary 
               for salvation, they would assuredly survive the storm. It 
               was under this pretense that William's mother made extra 
               bread loaves and allowed him to take them to those who might 
               need them, especially since most nearby food stores were 
               closed or people were refusing to risk the journey. Though 
               their own supplies were starting to dwindle, William convinced 
               his mother for one more loaf, as God would surely see the 
               depth of their piety, supply more, and keep them protected.

               William made sure he didn't stay on the street too long during 
               deliveries. For particular neighbors, he would leave broken 
               chunks of bread outside their door and knock, mainly to 
               satisfy his mother's request not to interact with anyone 
               directly, if possible. Plus, it was getting tougher for those 
               on the street to accept his charity. As the sickness became 
               more prevalent across the community, he saw mothers pulling 
               their children away from playmates; couples pausing before 
               neighbors, then turning and fleeing. It was hard to watch 
               the young crusaders, Leo and Gladwin, get intercepted in the 
               middle of a wooden sword duel by Gladwin's mother. Gladwin 
               screamed and struggled as his mum pulled him across the block, 
               leaving young Leo abandoned and crying. William also saw a 
               few brawls where people hurled rocks at those thought sick. 
               He noted daily that more and more shutters closed as people 
               hid themselves inside their homes.

               His heart called out to Symonne. He hadn't seen her since 
               their wonderful liaison at the lilies so many weeks ago, 
               where they talked endlessly and stood so close that he could 
               smell the sweetness of her hair beneath her wimple veil.

               William's fear for his sweetheart heightened as he navigated 
               the streets to where Symonne lived. He passed at least a 
               dozen people dead in the roadways, as if they had stepped 
               out for a glimpse of morning light and fell down on the spot. 
               Then there was the stack of five bodies placed one on top of 
               the other just outside the door of a three-story tenement 
               building, as if tenants who couldn't afford a proper burial 
               had gone to simply discarding the bodies in the open like 
               heaps of garbage, not caring if they were violated by either 
               men or beasts. With death's pungent smell, William couldn't 
               help but clutch the crystal tighter and push it more firmly 
               to his chest for greater protection.

               When he reached Symonne's block, he found her in the middle 
               of the street, crouched on her knees with hands clasped in 
               desperate prayer. Her back was to him, but he swore she was 
               wearing a simple sleeping gown and not dressed properly for 
               outdoors.  Even more disturbing, her hair billowed in waves 
               about her shoulders instead of being braided and hidden 
               beneath the usual head veil.

                                     WILLIAM
                         Symonne?

               (STOP SOBBING)

                                     SYMONNE
                         William?

               She hobbled to her feet, then turned. Startled, William 
               shuffled backward, as her once flawless skin now looked ruddy, 
               eyes sunken, and a horrid rash splattered across the top of 
               her chest which the gown couldn't cover.  (She coughed, a 
               slight gurgle in the heave)(Spit).

                                     SYMONNE
                         William, please ... I have already 
                         lost my beloved mother and brothers.  
                         My father ran away three days ago.  
                         I have no one.

                                     WILLIAM
                         My dear, I-I cannot ...

                                     SYMONNE
                                 (weeping)
                         I had such a wonderful time with you 
                         at the lilies.

                                     WILLIAM
                         No!  L-Leave me alone!

                                     SYMONNE
                         William!

               William hurled a stone at her.  The nugget hit Symonne in 
               the shoulder and knocked her off-balance.  (BAWLING)

               William's heart broke.  Nevertheless, he was safe, and for 
               that he kissed his amulet, but also felt the stain of his 
               own tears drop upon his hand.

                                     WILLIAM
                         I'm sorry!

               INT.  CATHEDRAL - DAY

               Fifteen caskets sat in the nave of the cathedral. Earlier 
               there had been twenty-five, a few of them so close they nearly 
               touched to fit inside the space.

               (WAILING)

                                     BISHOP JOHN
                         In nomine Patris, et Filii, et 
                         Spiritus Sancti.  Amen.

               Bishop Jean courted smoke from an incense box around the 
               coffins. These were not the normal funerary customs, but 
               these were not normal times. The bishop made sure the mourners 
               remained as far from him and the caskets as possible as he 
               offered prayers of assistance for the deceased. During this 
               particular round, his mind drifted to the monk, Joshua, 
               manning the tower bell as he heard it herald the passing of 
               yet another soul.

               INT. CHURCH OFFICE

               Later that afternoon, he had Joshua visit him in his office. 
               When the young lad entered, Jean was languishing over his 
               desk looking at parchment, his temple resting into the points 
               of his fingers in a clear exhibition of dismay.

                                     JOSHUA
                         You wished to see me, Excellency?

                                     BISHOP JEAN
                         A hundred and three yesterday.  Nearly 
                         two hundred today.  Twenty of our 
                         own have already been whisked away... 
                         Stop ringing the bells.

                                     JOSHUA
                         Yes, sir.

                                     BISHOP JEAN
                         And I am promoting you to Deacon.  
                         To replace Tumas.

               Joshua remained speechless. Prior to the outbreak, there 
               would never have been a chance of such promotion without 
               years of service and additional education. It demonstrated 
               just how badly the scourge had hit the ranks.

               (DOOR CLOSE)

                                     BISHOP JEAN
                         Oh Lord ... Why?  Why?

               EXT/INT.  DIRT ROAD - DAY

               Rachel hurried home.  She replaced the cross beam on the 
               door as quickly as she could, locking herself in, then stood 
               frozen in shock. Within seconds, her eyes watered, then the 
               tears flowed. Umfrey embraced her, relieved she had returned.

                                     UMFREY
                         Oh, my sweet daughter.

                                     UMFREY
                         Please don't ever do that again.  I 
                         cannot bear to lose you like I did 
                         your mother.

               (Rachel sob).

                                     RACHEL
                         Why is God doing this?

               INT. UMFREY'S HOME - DAY

               The air was silent when Rachel awoke. The diffused light 
               told her morning had come   that she had survived another 
               day. At first the quietude tricked her into thinking perhaps 
               the events four days ago were just a bad dream. Unfortunately, 
               as the mental fog lifted, the dreadful gnawing in her stomach 
               brought the horrors crashing back.  (She moaned under the 
               weight of her tired limbs).  She lifted herself from the 
               pallet bed. The braids of her hair hung in frayed strands, 
               mostly disintegrated from lack of care. It took a long moment 
               to finally settle upon her legs, then she shuffled toward 
               Umfrey who sat at a small table near the floor-to-ceiling 
               hearth where a small fire blazed beneath a dangling pot. His 
               face was long, his eyes filled with resignation.

                                     UMFREY
                         This won't be enough to get through 
                         the day.  Were there any food stores 
                         you saw?

                                     RACHEL
                         One or two.  But that was four days 
                         ago.

               (UMFREY SIGH) Umfrey threw a piece of sewn fabric and leather 
               onto the table. It was a face mask, as expertly crafted and 
               designed as one of his shoes.  Rachel slowly took it, 
               surprised he had gone through such effort to make the 
               provision. She marveled at its construction.  The joinery 
               matched the curvature of her jaw, with a center strip to 
               enclose her nose all the way to the point between her eyes. 
               A shoestring cord passed through the mask's edging, allowing 
               her to cinch it tightly to her face, then use the excess to 
               string it over her ears and tie it behind her head.

                                     UMFREY
                         I've scented the interior leather 
                         with -- I hope -- something that 
                         pleases you.

               Rachel gingerly cupped the mask over her mouth and took a 
               breath. The aroma was sweet. She wasn't sure how he did it, 
               but it smelled like orange citrus.  She quickly ran the 
               shoestring atop her ears. Umfrey helped her manage the cord 
               amid the folly of mangled hair so she could tie it properly 
               behind her head. Once secured, she rose and gave him a bear 
               hug.

                                     RACHEL
                         It is wonderful, poppa.

                                     UMFREY
                         Now go get what you can.
                                 (KISS)
                         But don't stay out too long.

                                     RACHEL
                         I won't.

               (Hurry to the door - open - outside).

               EXT.  CITY - ANOTHER MAIN ROAD - DAY

               Teams of corpse carriers hauled carts stacked with bodies 
               through the streets. Rachel couldn't determine if the body 
               count was any greater or lesser than it had been days ago, 
               but if the gasping into cloth handkerchiefs from lone 
               onlookers was any indication, the smell had certainly gotten 
               worse. Fortunately, the orange scent in her own facial 
               covering was working perfectly. At times, she caught herself 
               breathing more deeply, as if her subconscious had taken over 
               and blindly willed her lungs to engorge such sweetness over 
               the putrid smell of death.

               Luckily, she was able to find a brave merchant with food to 
               offer. The selection was meager, but she afforded enough for 
               at least two more weeks (if rationed properly), and the vendor 
               assured her he would do his best to keep a minimum stock. Of 
               course, with the portcullis closed, getting new goods into 
               town was tougher. The vendor explained that the city had to 
               reroute supplies through the port, and each ship had to prove 
               they had no one aboard sick or had come into contact with 
               anyone in other ports who were. What's more, less goods were 
               coming, as the disease was clearly ravaging other parts of 
               continental Europe.

               Rachel took the news with a heavy heart.  She worried 
               incessantly for Sarah and Clarice and promised to check on 
               them as soon as she had delivered the food home.

               INT. UMFREY'S HOME

                                     UMFREY
                         No ... I don't think it's a good 
                         idea.

                                     RACHEL
                         But the mask is working.  I promise 
                         it will only be a mere moment to 
                         check on them.  Please ...

               Beat.  Kiss?

                                     UMFREY
                         You do always keep your promises.

               (OUT THE DOOR)

               EXT. ANOTHER CITY STREET - CONTINUOUS

               The route to Sarah's tenement laid several blocks east, as 
               well as turning three corners, zigzagging to the north. On 
               way, she recognized five-year-old Leo standing outside his 
               ground floor dwelling.  (WEEPING)

                                     RACHEL
                         Leo, what is --

                                     LEO
                         Mommy and daddy.  They won't wake 
                         up.

               Rachel took Leo's hand and opened the door to peer in. Leo's 
               mother laid silently on a pallet bed with his father on the 
               floor beside her. Both were riddled with the plague rash   
               clearly dead.

               Rachel knelt and looked deeply into Leo's face.  She quickly 
               tore off a piece of her dress and used it like a glove to 
               pat down his clothes, hoping to wipe off any traces of plague 
               if there were any. Then she glanced around for something 
               more. Down the block, a lone flag draped from a pole outside 
               a closed business caught her attention.

                                     RACHEL
                         Stay here.

               She slid the fabric off the post.  Then returned and began 
               wrapping it around Leo.

                                     RACHEL
                         Remember how you wanted to be a 
                         crusader?  This is your armor.  This 
                         will protect you from forces both 
                         seen and unseen.  Is that good?  
                         Now, we have to get you to training.  
                         Will you let me take you?

               Leo hesitated.  Then at last gave the affirmative.  Rachel 
               took his hand.

                                     RACHEL
                         Hold tight and don't let go.

               (FOOTSTEPS)

                                     RACHEL
                         Don't look back.  You serve God now, 
                         remember?

                                     LEO
                         Will I see mommy and daddy again?

                                     RACHEL
                         Yes, you will.  Someday, I promise. 
                         ... What's it like being a crusader?  
                         Tell me.

               Rachel suddenly spotted a trio of waste sniffers huddled 
               over the putrid excrement canals leading out to the bay, 
               inhaling deep breaths of the pungent shit. The poor bastards 
               extended shawls over their heads to capture the scent as 
               they buried their faces in the muck. Each of them scowled 
               from the foulness. But they also believed they had no choice, 
               as they were fighting for their lives.

               EXT.  RECTORY - DAY

               When Rachel and Leo at last made entry onto the cathedral 
               grounds, it became evident she couldn't shield the young lad 
               from the calamity. They had to skirt the graveyard to reach 
               the rectory. There were five sets of gravediggers shoveling 
               plots, with hardly any space left within the borders of the 
               cemetery for more. Fresh mounds of the newly interred erupted 
               from the greenery, spanning nearly the whole of an acre, 
               filling the open field Umfrey had seen a few weeks earlier. 
               Leo stared, but was unsure what the diggers were really doing. 
               For Rachel, it exposed a greater understanding of the scope 
               of the menace.

               She hurried Leo up the steps to the rectory door.  (KNOCK - 
               DOOR OPENING).

                                     RACHEL
                         I have a young man here who would 
                         like to learn the means and ways of 
                         becoming a crusader.  Can you teach 
                         him?

               The clergyman knelt before Leo and clasped his own hands in 
               prayer.

                                     FRIAR
                         Can you pray with me?

               Leo put his hands together in a mimic of the prayer.

                                     FRIAR
                         Yes, we can teach him.

                                     RACHEL
                         You are with God now.  Go.

               The friar took Leo gently by the shoulders and led him inside.

               (DOOR CLOSE)

               Then the sound of another door opening caught Rachel's 
               attention.  She gingerly descended the steps and delicately 
               proceeded to follow the walls of the cathedral until it led 
               to the city's wall behind it. Indeed, a pair of monks had 
               opened a gate leading to a field outside. She remembered how 
               the main city portcullis was closed and people were forbidden 
               to leave, yet here was a gate at the rear of the cathedral. 
               She wondered if the monks were fleeing, especially when spying 
               the clergymen pass through the aperture into the field, 
               disappearing from sight.

               Rachel scrambled to the edge of the gate and peeked out. 
               What she saw confused her. A group of a dozen or more friars 
               were digging a large trench in the open grassland. Three or 
               four peeked out at one end to toss dirt, showing they had 
               already descended a good five feet. At the other end, another 
               friar standing atop at the edge pulled a brother out, showing 
               his side of the trench was deeper than the full height of a 
               regular person. She spotted a priest scattering holy water 
               across a secondary field, off to the right. It dawned on her 
               they were creating a new cemetery, with the trench being the 
               quickest way to bury so many bodies at once. Her stomach 
               churned. This meant there wouldn't be individual plots; 
               sacraments and other funerary customs had been abandoned. 
               The real terror of the pestilence suddenly became even more 
               raw (if that was possible) with this revelation.

               (A crack of thunder) Rachel clenched her teeth behind the 
               mask, then sprinted to escape the cathedral grounds.

               (RAINFALL)  The gravediggers rushed inside while Rachel 
               remained to endure the inundation. Her hair quickly soaked, 
               and her sodden clothes hung on her like leaden weights. Each 
               footfall splatted a gush of water and mud. At times the 
               ferocity of the downpour blinded her. Nonetheless, she felt 
               committed to making one more much-desired house call.

               EXT. ANOTHER CITY STREET - LATER

               By the time Rachel returned into the heart of town, the rain 
               had helped empty the street of most people, except the corpse-
               carriers. She saw a pair hauling a stack of three bodies on 
               a plank. They deposited the dead into the back of a cart 
               already stacked with corpses, soaked from the rain. A friar 
               (no doubt on duty from the cathedral) covered his mouth as 
               he approached and motioned the cross over the heap. He failed 
               to see another plank brought up behind him from a second 
               pair of haulers, carrying two more corpses. The carriers 
               nudged him, surprising him for his services.

               Rachel turned squeamish, then hurried up the steps of the 
               tenement building.

               At the top of the second-floor landing, she encountered the 
               body of an adult crumpled over, just outside the door to 
               Sarah's apartment. Rachel recognized it was Sarah's father, 
               Oudin, wrapped in a blanket. His fingertips were black while 
               clutching the mantle, his face jaundiced, with no signs of 
               life. The terror tore through her like a firestorm. She 
               hurried into the apartment without bothering to knock.

               INT. 2ND STORY TENEMENT ROOM - CONTINUOUS

               The mask failed to protect her against the putrid smell so 
               pungent throughout the apartment. It was rank, with a tint 
               of sickening sweetness. When mixed with orange scent of the 
               mask's leather, the combination turned her stomach. She 
               instinctively put a hand over her nose, then cautiously 
               approached her friend lying still on the bed. Sarah's face 
               had already turned gray, dead for who knew how long.  (Rachel 
               whimpered from the shock and struggled to fight back tears).  
               Then she noticed Clarice lying on a second bed pressed up 
               next to Sarah's, at the foot. She noted Clarice's head 
               drooped, with dried blood caked on her lips   also deceased.  
               (She couldn't hold back the tears any longer. She buckled, 
               then regained herself and dried her cheeks with her palms).

                                     MARIE
                         God is punishing us!

               Sarah and Clarice's mother, Marie, sat against the wall with 
               her legs bent up, head buried into her knees.  (COUGHING) 
               Rachel approached, stopped at a safe distance, then lowered 
               herself to get a better look.

                                     RACHEL
                         Madam Marie --

                                     MARIE
                         Oudin is dead, isn't he?  ... He 
                         didn't want to flee like so many 
                         others, so stayed outside the door, 
                         hoping to remain safe.
                                 (TEARS; COUGH)
                         He refused to come back inside.  
                         Even when he started coughing.

               (COUGH - SPIT)

                                     MARIE
                         No blood ... yet.  Clarice only had 
                         it three days, then it took her.  
                         Oudin ... less.  My time is close.

               She lengthened her right leg then lifted the dress to reveal 
               two buboes, packed together on her inner thigh. One was larger 
               than the other, with a lesion oozing blackened blood.

                                     MARIE
                         Oudin is gone, so are my daughters.  
                         Will I see them in purgatory?  Or 
                         will I just die into nothingness by 
                         God's judgment of me?

                                     RACHEL
                         No.  I might know someone who can 
                         ease your suffering.

               (COUGHING).  (RACHEL LEAVING APARTMENT)

               EXT.  CITY - MAIN ROAD - DAY

               Rachel wondered what reckoning Umfrey would give her, but 
               trusted he would remain safely indoors and not go in search 
               of her. As she saw it, her friends were facing a deadly 
               precipice (along with so many others), and she had to do 
               what she could to help. She recalled Giovanni saying Elouan 
               was assisting his family in the fields, so she knew where to 
               find him. If he could bring any kind of aid, it would be 
               worth the effort, as well as Umfrey's rage.

               She dropped the face mask again to gather a deeper breath as 
               she hurried into the livery for her horse. She skidded to a 
               halt when finding her old steed dying in the hay, sores of 
               the plague bulging from the animal's neck.  (The mare 
               recognized her and whinnied pitifully).  Rachel's heart burst. 
               Distraught, she sprinted back outside, then turned down 
               another road with a set of stables at the end. Within minutes, 
               she was on a fit stallion galloping toward the cathedral.

               EXT. CATHEDRAL - LATER

               (THUNDER).  A second deluge kept the cathedral grounds empty 
               of workmen or friars from interfering as Rachel rounded the 
               charger to the closed gate. She jumped down from the horse, 
               released the gate's locking bolt, then tugged furiously on 
               the door. The massive weight resisted her pull, (and the 
               hinges squeaked in defiance).  The muddy ground dragged her 
               feet in, making it harder to maneuver. She put all her 
               strength into it, but the gate refused to yield.  (Thunder 
               cracked, much louder and closer, making her tug with more 
               urgency. The horse snorted and its breath billowed. It clawed 
               the mud nervously)

                                     RACHEL
                         NO!  Stay.

               A flash of lightning suddenly blinded her, followed quickly 
               by the thunder.  (The horse shuddered, trumpeted a loud 
               fluttering sound from its nostrils, but kept its ground).

               Rachel grit her teeth, then summoned her strength with the 
               force of a scream. The hinge finally gave way and the door 
               swung open. She heaved to catch her breath, then quickly 
               mounted the stallion-just as a pair of friars rushed from 
               the cathedral.

                                     FRIAR1
                         Who goes there!

                                     FIRAR2
                         Stop!

               Rachel darted into the open field, winding around the great 
               trench. Whether or not she found Elouan, she wondered how 
               she would get back inside the city now that the friars would 
               surely keep a closer eye on the gate.